Say Beauty from... corrections

[Raichu]

Say Beauty from...

v1 line 4 ends with "koro" meaning time rather than place. So I would change "where" in lines 3 and 4 to "when".

v4 line 3 todoku is intranstive so I think it means "the voice drowned out in the crowd of people doesn't reach me."

probably a typo, v5 line 4 both the audio and original lyrics say yomikaeshite, not yomikakeshite.

UPDATE: also vv2 and 7 omoigakenai is one word. I think the translation is inaccurate, closer to "I looked at the unexpected nightscape".

[Fuukanou]

Thanks, these changes have now been made.