konosuba ending

[merithedestroyer]

while i was playing i tripped and hurt my knee
it began to bleed and flow its pain into me
but i laughed it off since i knew that it would heal
and tomor Row there will be a scab i could peel
at the cape i push my boat off from the land
and it blows the sails billowing tall and grand
i can see the shore receeding in the breeze
as i go on my voyage to sail the seven seas
from the south a gale rises into a squall
and the clouds they burst and raindrops start to fall
its a sign that spring is ready to begin
but first i must return home to take the laundry in

[Fuukanou]

https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ko...aboukensha.htm


If you wrote those rhyming lyrics, then that's impressive, however, this site doesn't favour rhyming/singable lyrics over their non counterpart, and so I cannot replace them, unless you can find valid mistakes in the original translation and can prove yours is a superior translation of the original Japanese lyrics and not forcibly changing the meaning to allow rhyming.