AnimeGalleries [dot] NetAnimeWallpapers [dot] ComAnimeLyrics [dot] ComAnimePedia [dot] ComAnimeGlobe [dot] Com


User Tag List

Closed Thread
Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

  1. #1
    Moderator
    AnimeLyrics Admin
    Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou's Avatar
    Gil
    0.31
    Gender
    Gifts Mic Piano
    Mentioned
    29 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    07-08-2020 01:17 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Sep 2016
    Location
    on AnimeLyrics.com
    Threads
    69
    Posts
    355
    AL Lyrics
    206
    Rep Power
    25

    Default Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

    https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/sup.../hoshimata.htm
    https://www.animelyrics.com/game/mah...gamatataku.htm



    As before I'll write it in order kanji -> original translation -> new translation. It's a translation correction, so please could you look at it @bluepenguin



    OK, I think the title's had some poetic license taken here.
    星が瞬くこんな夜に
    Upon The Stars Twinkling Ever So Brightly That Night
    Upon This Night Where The Stars Twinkle Ever So Brightly


    「……ボクのせいじゃ
    ないですよ」って
    そんな顔をしてる
    You pleaded "...It's not my fault,
    It wasn't me, honest!"
    While giving me that look of yours
    "It wasn't me, honest!"--
    That's the kind of face
    You're pulling



    星が瞬くこんな夜に
    願い事をひとつ
    叶うならこの時よ続けと
    同じ空を見上げながら
    大切な事ほど
    Upon the stars twinkling ever so brightly that night
    If I could just make one wish
    Then take me back to that time and place
    Where we gazed up at the heavens together
    When I thought just maybe
    On this night where the stars twinkle ever so brightly
    If I could just make one wish
    Then please let this moment last forever
    While looking up at the same sky as you,
    I thought just maybe



    私が怒ってばかりいるように
    見えるだろうけど
    So you probably really thought that
    All of my pouts of anger were real
    So you probably really thought that
    I'm always getting angry


    星が瞬くこんな夜に
    ひとりぼっちが二人
    抱えた痛みを分け合うように
    Upon the stars twinkling ever so brightly that night
    Loneliness felt as if the two of us
    Were sharing the pain that we've held in for so long
    On this night where the stars twinkle ever so brightly
    There are two people who are all alone
    As if sharing the pain we've held in for so long


    だけど何て言えば
    いいんだろう
    But what should I have said
    To have made everything right again
    But just what
    Should I say?


    星が瞬くこんな夜に
    忘れてた事をひとつ
    言いかけて
    どくんと跳ねる鼓動
    闇の中一瞬触れた手
    キミは気がついてる?
    これってきっと
    そういう事なのかな
    Upon the stars twinkling ever so brightly that night
    I had to tell you one important thing
    I'd forgotten to say
    My heart was beating like crazy
    In the darkness, in that instant
    Did you notice our hands touching?
    My heart's trembling
    It's that emotion is it not?
    On this night where the stars twinkle ever so brightly
    I go to tell you one important thing
    I'd forgotten to say
    But my heart skips a beat--
    In the darkness, just for a moment our hands touched
    Did you notice?

    Surely this is...
    That emotion, right? [ideally in the translation 'that' should be italicised to convey the emphasis]


    星が瞬くこんな
    こんな夜に
    Upon the stars twinkling
    Ever, ever so brightly that night
    On this night
    Where the stars twinkle ever so brightly
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 02-16-2020 at 03:47 PM.

  2. #2
    Moderator
    AnimeLyrics Admin
    EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations's Avatar
    Gil
    32,878.56
    Gender
    Gifts Mic Mic Portal Companion Cube
    Mentioned
    70 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    06-25-2020 10:24 AM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Mars
    Threads
    122
    Posts
    1,154
    AL Lyrics
    714
    Rep Power
    54
    Gamer IDs

    PSN ID: xenographer Steam ID: xen0glossy

    Default Re: Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

    Looks good! At a quick count, it looks like you'd be making changes to at least half the lines, so do you want to give me your full translation?

  3. #3
    Moderator
    AnimeLyrics Admin
    Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou has a reputation beyond repute Fuukanou's Avatar
    Gil
    0.31
    Gender
    Gifts Mic Piano
    Mentioned
    29 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    07-08-2020 01:17 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Sep 2016
    Location
    on AnimeLyrics.com
    Threads
    69
    Posts
    355
    AL Lyrics
    206
    Rep Power
    25

    Default Re: Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

    Sorry, I wasn't expecting a replacement so I hadn't prepared one in advance.
    Here it is: https://pastebin.com/bPtfJGyG (title, romaji, translation, kanji; each section separated by three line breaks)

    I decided to double check the kanji/romaji before I started translating and I found that the lines had been broken up too much in the current transliteration so I redid that.
    There's one word in italics on the second to last line of the translation, if the site doesn't want to play ball then feel free to remove the italics.

    Thanks.
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 04-10-2020 at 09:33 PM. Reason: refreshed link

  4. #4
    Moderator
    AnimeLyrics Admin
    EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations has a reputation beyond repute EJTranslations's Avatar
    Gil
    32,878.56
    Gender
    Gifts Mic Mic Portal Companion Cube
    Mentioned
    70 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    06-25-2020 10:24 AM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Mars
    Threads
    122
    Posts
    1,154
    AL Lyrics
    714
    Rep Power
    54
    Gamer IDs

    PSN ID: xenographer Steam ID: xen0glossy

    Default Re: Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

    Thanks, this has been updated.

  5. Thanks Fuukanou thanked for this post
Closed Thread

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

     

Similar Threads

  1. Suigintou no Yoru (Bleach)
    By SailorPokeMoon in forum Shift_JIS Kanji Lyric Submissions
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 04-12-2019, 11:36 AM
  2. Replies: 5
    Last Post: 12-11-2012, 10:17 AM
  3. Replies: 5
    Last Post: 06-26-2011, 09:03 AM
  4. {REQ} Sen no Yoru wo Koete
    By Catanbri in forum Lyric Requests
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 04-04-2008, 09:41 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts