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    Default Hitorigoto

    https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/er...hitorigoto.htm

    As before I'll write it in order kanji -> original translation -> new translation -> [explanation if needed]. It's a translation correction, so please could you look at it @bluepenguin

    掛け違えてる ボタンみたいなもどかしさを
    ほどけないまま また難しくしようとしてる
    I'm so mixed up and I still can't wrap my head around this Irritation
    And so I make things difficult again
    By not fixing a frustration that's like a button that's been done up incorrectly,
    I'm just trying to make things difficult for myself again


    ふとしたときに 探しているよ
    While searching for something, I realized
    And the next thing I knew, I was looking-

    たった一言 ねえどうして Ah
    It's just one word Hey, why is it... Ah
    It's just a single sentence, but why, ah
    [This correction probably needs justifying that it's the "キミノコト" & whatever comes after it that's the 一言 being referred to]

    1000ピースある パズルみたいな選択肢と
    想像力が 判断力の邪魔をしちゃう
    The judgment of my imagination is hindered
    With choices like a puzzle with a thousand pieces
    When faced with choices, like a puzzle with a thousand pieces
    My imagination gets in the way of my ability to decide


    可愛くない顔みせて 自己嫌悪+後悔で
    ため込んだ「ごめんね」を吐きだすには ほど遠い・・・
    Show me your face that isn't cute Self-loathing and misunderstanding
    You stashed it away and spit out a far away "I'm sorry"
    Show an uncute face, with self-loathing plus regret added to the mix
    A far-cry from spitting out the "I'm sorry" jammed up at the back of my throat...


    君のこと ほんとはずっと
    Honestly, I want you to be forever...Ah
    You know, truth is, I've always... Ah
    [This one's probably a bit controversial. I think the original translation is just reading the line for what's there (or trying to finish a purposely unfinished line), but think it's going for what the rest of the "キミノコト" bit was before, and I can't imagine it being anything other than "好きです/でした". This comes with the massive downside of word order making it a pain to phrase it. I recommend putting a footnote in and saying what the line's intended finished bit is, this is what the Japanese is actually saying, while putting the English half-said confession in the translation.]
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 11-20-2019 at 12:57 AM.

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