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    Default Slayers NEXT - Otome no Inori

    More old Slayers songs! The lyrics of this one are closer to the mark but still have a lot of errors.

    Active link: https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sl...omenoinori.htm
    Kanji: http://www.kasi-time.com/item-8503.html

    Red: Incorrect lines
    Orange: Possibly subjective lines
    Green: Weirdly worded

    Current translation:
    To this small girl loving is
    wonderful
    , my darling

    A glistening rouge (a longful dream)
    a pink peach
    I want to reach for it - a maiden's prayer.

    * I float to the night sky - the silver of this happiness
    I like to shake the waves of darkness

    my little heart is aching so profoundly
    let my heart leap into your origin

    I beg you, let me reach, it's this maiden's will
    It's all I am, this pretty me.

    To this small girl loving is
    wonderful
    , my darling

    I'm giddy, that cologne (a beautiful dream)
    a light blue parasol
    I wish it would come true - it's this maiden's will

    * Repeat

    I beg you, let me reach, it's this maiden's will
    the last kiss is a boomerang
    this boomerang is a ticket for a one way trip


    It's all I am, this pretty me
    I feel like I'm on top of a white pegasus
    delivering
    the jigsaw of
    love's last piece

    Proposed revised translation:

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    You're too dazzling for a girl in love with love
    My Darling
    
    A sparkling rouge (A yearning dream)
    A pink peach
    I hope this maiden's prayer reaches you
    
    * Floating through the night sky on a little silver boat
    Rocked by waves of love and hate
    It makes my little heart ache
    My heart flies to your side
    
    Please carry there this maiden's prayer
    I offer all my pure self to you
    
    You're too dazzling for a girl in love with love
    My Darling
    
    A dizzying cologne (A twinkling dream)
    A light blue parasol
    I hope this maiden's prayer comes true
    
    * Repeat
    
    Please carry there this maiden's prayer
    The kiss I threw is a boomerang
    A boomerang on a one-way trip
    
    I offer all my pure self to you
    I want to place my feelings upon a white Pegasus
    And send them to you
    The final puzzle piece of love

    Also the "shiroi PEGASASU ni omoi nosete" of the third to last line in the transliteration should be "shiroi PEGASASU ni omoi wo nosete"
    Last edited by ArtemisA; 10-24-2019 at 06:57 PM.

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    Default Re: Slayers NEXT - Otome no Inori

    Similarly to the other thread, I've updated the kanji and corrected the romaji error, but @bluepenguin will have to handle the translation replacement.

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    Default Re: Slayers NEXT - Otome no Inori

    @Fuukanou
    Yep, no worries! Just wanted to get them posted. I may be posting a few more if I run into them- or should I just PM Blue instead if they're full redoes of older lyrics like these?

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    Default Re: Slayers NEXT - Otome no Inori

    I'm not sure (I've only become a mod relatively recently so there's a lot to learn), but I would suggest you continue posting them here, because the general rule is that you only PM if it's a song that you've already posted a transliteration or translation for. Even though there's no "original poster" to consult/justify themselves with these old lyrics, I think it's worth keeping in threads if not for anything else for posterity and the possible chance of double-checking. Obviously if bluepenguin says PMs are alright then go right ahead.

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    Default Re: Slayers NEXT - Otome no Inori

    Quote Originally Posted by Fuukanou View Post
    Even though there's no "original poster" to consult/justify themselves with these old lyrics, I think it's worth keeping in threads if not for anything else for posterity and the possible chance of double-checking.
    Yeah, I'm in agreement on this.

    Anyway, the translation looks good and I've added it.

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