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    Default PSI-missing

    https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/kaw...psimissing.htm
    https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/index/psimissing.htm

    I've already gone through and corrected the kanji and romaji (and typos in the footnotes)
    This is a translation correction so please could you handle this @bluepenguin

    I'll proceed in the order kanji, current translation, recommended translation, justification (just in case).

    ここに生きるその訳も
    Both reason to live here
    Both the reason I'm alive here
    [it would make more sense for it to be 住む if it meant live in that sense]


    胸をチクリと刺す痛み
    それを嘲笑(わら)う傍観者(しあわせなもの)達へ
    背を向け行く
    The pain pierces my chest
    Everytime time happy people (bystanders) laugh (sneer)
    Pointing at my size'
    A prickling pain pierces my chest
    I turn my back to those who are so happy (bystanders)
    Who laugh (sneer) at that pain

    [Looks like OP mistook チクリ for チンチクリン and also ignored the それ and the third line (which admittedly was originally romanised wrong)]


    震えだす足が覚えてる確信に
    幻想(ゆめ)だけじゃ守れない
    頼らない力
    今この手が知るから迷わない
    My trembling legs start to remember... surely
    I can't protect my dreams (illusions)
    With this unreliable power
    Now, knowing this hand, I won't lose my way
    My legs, which begin to tremble, remember this... which becomes my certainty
    With just dreams (illusions) I can't protect
    It's an unreliable power-
    Now, my hands have felt it, so I won't lose my way



    百、千の必定も偶然が勝る
    果てを見る瞳を凝らして飛び越える
    怠慢な願いなど幾つもいらない
    If a hundred, a thousand inevitable accidents happen
    And I concentrate my eyes on watching the end... I'll go past them
    I don't need countless careless wishes,
    The number of coincidences outweigh a hundred or thousand certainties
    I focus my eyes looking at the end... and jump over it
    I don't need countless lazy wishes

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    Default Re: PSI-missing

    If this many changes are needed I'd rather replace the translation--can you/do you want to give me a translation of the full song?

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    Default Re: PSI-missing

    Quote Originally Posted by bluepenguin View Post
    If this many changes are needed I'd rather replace the translation--can you/do you want to give me a translation of the full song?

    Sure thing, thanks!
    UPDATED: https://pastebin.com/DCp8Ekkv
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 10-24-2019 at 12:05 PM.

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    Default Re: PSI-missing

    I think you missed handling the 違う in verse 4

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    Default Re: PSI-missing

    Quote Originally Posted by bambooXZX View Post
    I think you missed handling the 違う in verse 4

    Thanks, I had totally forgotten about it. I've updated the pastebin in the previous comment. If there's anything else you think looks off, I'd love to know.
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 10-24-2019 at 12:05 PM.

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    Thanks! I've replaced the translation.

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