Lyrics correction for Kegare Naki Bara Juuji

[kodokun]

I did this translation and I noticed a mistake:

Hai to natte kiete yuku no
Ai suru daichi e

Will disappear and scatter
Towards the land I so adore

and should be

Will become ash and scatter
Towards the land I so adore

2 places in the song.

[Fuukanou]

Hi,

If it was you have translated/transcripted the song, feel free to PM me any changes rather than make a thread. In addition, if you are requesting corrections by thread or PM, please include a link to the song.

I have made the changes you have requested.