on the verse: shiawase o todoke ni doko made mo mina utae
is not utae is warae which is to smile in imperative form
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on the verse: shiawase o todoke ni doko made mo mina utae
is not utae is warae which is to smile in imperative form
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/naruto/harumonia.htm
Fixed, thanks!
There are actually a few more issues here:
Verse 4 line 2:
shiawase o wasure teu shimatta ra mina utae
→ shiawase o wasurete te shimatta ra [...]
Between verse 4 and 5, there should be another "nee kikoe masu ka?" / "can you hear me?"
Verse 7(→8) line 4:
yadori ki no moto
→ yadorigi no moto
Verse 9(→10) line 1:
ume miru hito e negai o komete
→ yume miru [...]
Thanks!
Also, now that I'm looking at it more closely, I don't love the verb endings being separated from the verb stems like that, so if anyone felt like doing a re-transliteration I would take it.
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