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    Default Harumonia corerction

    on the verse: shiawase o todoke ni doko made mo mina utae
    is not utae is warae which is to smile in imperative form
    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/naruto/harumonia.htm

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    Default Re: Harumonia corerction

    Fixed, thanks!

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    Default Re: Harumonia corerction

    There are actually a few more issues here:



    Verse 4 line 2:
    shiawase o wasure teu shimatta ra mina utae
    → shiawase o wasurete te shimatta ra [...]



    Between verse 4 and 5, there should be another "nee kikoe masu ka?" / "can you hear me?"



    Verse 7(→8) line 4:
    yadori ki no moto
    yadorigi no moto



    Verse 9(→10) line 1:
    ume miru hito e negai o komete
    yume miru [...]

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    Default Re: Harumonia corerction

    Thanks!

    Also, now that I'm looking at it more closely, I don't love the verb endings being separated from the verb stems like that, so if anyone felt like doing a re-transliteration I would take it.

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