Error of Love

[Raichu]

Error of Love

verse 3 line 1 iyawarechau → kirawarechau

suggested improvements:

• Verse 8 soretomo I think means "if not" rather than "yet still". I think the sense is "You must rescue me. If not, are you goint to throw me away?"
• 5th line from the end, todoku koto no nai koe o anata ni todoke tsuzukeru
  has "I will keep trying to send my voice to you, even though it never will" which seems incomplete. Maybe "[...] though it will never get there"?

[EJTranslations]

Fixed that transliteration error (and another one I found while I was at it), and I agree with your suggested improvements, so I've made those changes as well.