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    Default Sirius [not serious]

    https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/killlakill/sirius.htm


    Uhh there's a few mistakes, inconsistencies (esp. spacing in -te iru conjugations and contractions) and the romaji doesn't follow the romaji in terms of what's on what line.


    I've fixed the mistakes and line order below (I did not touch the consistency apart from in cases where a wrong word was made), but in case the line order is transliterator's choice, I have bolded my changes of mistakes and the few consistency ones.


    Dare ka ga katte ni kimeta
    READY MADE na kyou wo nugisutete
    Hadashi de hashitte iku

    Machigatta tte koronda tte
    Surimuita itami mo
    ORIGINAL na ashita ni naru

    Tsuki ageta kono te ni nigiri shimeta
    Chikai ga hikari ni natte
    Itsuka kimi ni todoku sono shunkan made
    Naiteru hima nante nai kara

    Hamidashite shimatta atsui omoi ga
    Yozora de kagayaki dasu
    Umarete kita imi ga wakatta ki ga shita
    Negaigoto wa zenbu kono te de kanaeru

    Fuan ni aragau dakede
    Mou seiippai de
    Oete shimatte ita kinou ga atta kedo

    Tachi domatte ta sonna jikan mo
    Hitsuyou datta no kana nante
    Ima wa ne omoeteru

    Kurayami wo kirisaki tadori tsuita
    Keshiki no sono mukou ni
    Itsumo kimi ga chanto matte te kurete ta
    Itooshiku kirameku sekai de

    Ryuusei gun oi koshi takaku takaku
    Kokoro ga sakebu saki e
    Moratte iru ijou ni agerareru you ni
    Nee mirai wa zenbu kono te de kanaeru

    Hiza wo kakaete ita yoru mo nami de mukaeta asa mo
    Donna toki mo mabayui hoshi mitai ni

    Tsuki ageta kono te ni nigiri shimeta
    Chikai ga hikari ni natte
    Itsuka kimi ni todoku sono shunkan made
    Naiteru hima nante nai kara

    Hamidashite shimatta atsui omoi ga
    Yozora de kagayaki dasu
    Umarete kita imi ga wakatta ki ga shita
    Negaigoto wa zenbu kono te de kanaeru
    Sou mirai wa zenbu kono te de kanaeru






    i wonder how long i can keep up the funny thread names

    ---------- Post added at 10:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:56 PM ----------

    https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/garnidelia/ambiguous.htm
    https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ki.../ambiguous.htm

    While I'm at it, the kanji for Ambiguous lacks [many of] the spaces, here it is with them:
    運命の意図を 断ち切った その先に..

    背伸びしていたんだ
    靴擦れだらけの 狭い 世界で
    ランウェイを歩く 笑顔の裏側
    隠した つもりで

    だけど いつも 君には
    見抜かれてしまっていて
    こんなのは はじめてで 戸惑うけど

    他の誰にも 着こなせない
    なんだか わかんない 熱さが 胸を焦がすから
    運命の糸 手繰り寄せた その先に
    新しい夜明けが来る

    かじかんだ指で ずっと 探してた
    煌めく 世界の
    答は いつだって ティーカップの中
    映っていたんだ

    火傷しそうな 温度
    甘すぎるし 苦すぎる
    自分達だけの美学 飲みほして

    あの日 君が 教えてくれた
    なんだか わかんない 熱さが 頬を伝うから
    それぞれの想い 絡み合った その先に
    新しい夜明けが来る

    この 愛おしい 世界を 守りたいだけの
    たった それだけの 無茶な きもち
    だけど 一縷の望みは 君が 隣にいること

    他の誰にも 着こなせない
    なんだか わかんない 熱さが 胸を焦がすから
    運命の糸 手繰り寄せた その先に
    ほら どこまでも続く未来

    今日も 君が 教えてくれた
    なんだか わかんない 熱さが 頬を伝うから
    それぞれの願い 絡み合った その先に
    新しい夜明けが来る

    想いは きっと ひとつ




    and so when I was double checking if there was a similar J-POP listing for Sirius I found that INNOCENCE [https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/aoieir/innocence.htm] was actually just a copy of Aurora [https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/aoieir/aurora.htm]. You could cross post the one from the SAO anime page [https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sao/innocence.htm] as a replacement.
    Last edited by Fuukanou; 08-01-2018 at 02:42 PM. Reason: wow i spelt the title wrong
    [Notice: the preceding post was written by someone with a poor grasp of the Japanese language. If you could correct me when I make mistakes, it'd be much appreciated.]

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    Default Re: Sirus [not serious]

    Thanks! All of these should be taken care of now. (Also, while we give people some leeway for stylistic choices, romaji really should be following the line and stanza breaks in the original Japanese lyrics unless lines need to be broken up more to avoid stretching the screen, so do keep letting me know when you see that!)

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