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    Default Yomi no Tasogare no, Utsuru Naru Aoki Hitomi no.

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    ---------- Post added at 11:48 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:29 PM ----------

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    Default Re: Yomi no Tasogare no, Utsuru Naru Aoki Hitomi no.

    You brought to my eye another mistake. The last verse in the transliteration and the translation were different. Turns out that I missed out one whole verse and forgot to repeat two other verses. (Every time I try to submit something, I have to fill a captcha and then I lose my submission. I have to copy-paste everything again and refresh another page so I do not encounter the captcha once again. Luckily, it (probably) does not get submitted twice).



    Please update the translation with this:
    Interlocking our fingers, let us dance
    Our matching pure white clothes are dyed,
    Like the window,
    In colours of twilight

    It was the spring that smelt of daphnes[2]
    This "now" won't last for eternity
    Realizing that the time will come when we are divided into two,
    I cried

    It is okay if this place is Hades
    In our like vacant blue eyes,
    In place of the sorrow we do not yet know,
    I want to blur in that beautiful darkness

    With our chests together, let us dance in circles
    As sweetly fragrant maidens

    The sounds of footsteps concur with each other,
    Resounding somewhere
    Beyond the sky

    You are my death
    I am your life
    That is so that one life
    Continues till death

    What is that which we have inherited
    Who is the father I have never met?
    On the other side of the latticework
    A vivid voice passes by

    This is the place below hell
    The four blue vacant eyes
    Would stare into the night,
    And so seem to melt into one

    Let us detour[3] without being separated
    In the next world,
    We'll awaken together again

    We will start over from the beginning
    In the shining morning mist,
    We will go to the eyes that do not open

    You are my eyes
    I am your eyes
    Though it is so, why is it that
    We are unable to see the same dreams?

    With our chests together, let us dance in circles
    As sweetly fragrant maidens

    The sounds of footsteps concur with each other,
    Resounding somewhere
    Beyond the sky

    I am still a girl
    You are still a doll
    Life and death stand on the same stage
    At Grand Guignol


    And please add these notes too:
    [2] Daphnes usually flower in very early spring or in late winter.

    [3] This refers to the Rin'ne cycle, an endless cycle of rebirth without a beginning or an end.

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    Default Re: Yomi no Tasogare no, Utsuru Naru Aoki Hitomi no.

    Quote Originally Posted by Fuukanou View Post
    Also, unrelated, but the search bar is broken. It leads to the search screen with the wrong search term carried forward, but that search page works fine.
    I think a lot of people aren't clear on this, but I have no access to the site backend at all. Everything I do is through forms; I can't see or touch the code. Stuff like this is in Kaitou Ace's hands, so he's the one to PM about it.

    Anyway, @sayakacarys , I've replaced the translation. Thanks!

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