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    Default Help on checking and uploading Canoue - 氷の魔女は眠る Koori no Majou wa Nemuru

    Hello, I asked a friend to translate this song and would love it if anyone can help give it a check and probably upload it to the animelyrics database as I have no access to upload them. I love both the song and the circle so much and would love it if the lyrics can be shared.

    Song can be heard here :

    Title : 氷の魔女は眠る/ Koori no Majou wa Nemuru /The Ice Witch Sleeps

    Original :
    薄氷(うすらい)を割る春の音で目覚めた少女は
    溜息に朧な記憶を重ねた

    永い冬を留める森へと響いた詩
    爪弾かれた旋律と共に

    呪いを消した男は
    忌み嫌われた哀しみに
    凍てつく涙さえ溶かす
    優しい陽だまり

    彼が旅する景色だけを心に描いて
    もう一度出逢うために
    ただ眠った

    もしも空に輝く塔へと上れたなら
    貴方を見つけられるかしら

    翼はなく声は嗄れ
    彼女はいずれ変わりゆく
    孤独を癒やす温もりを求める
    魔女へと覧覧

    雪の中に現れ去りゆく彼女の手が
    愛しい幻をなぞった

    幾度も繰り返す運命(とき)
    季節が何度廻ろうと
    私は「春」と呼んだのは貴方だけだった

    氷が溶けたその刹那
    彼女は恋をして
    決して叶わない夢を心に刻んだ
    新たな呪いを

    romaji :
    usurai wo waru haru no oto de mezameta shoujo wa
    tameiki ni oboro na kioku wo kasaneta

    nagai fuyu wo todomeru mori he to hibiita uta
    tsumabikareta senritsu to tomo ni

    noroi wo keshita otoko wa
    imi kirawareta kanashimi ni
    itetsuku namida sae tokasu
    yasashii hidamari

    kare ga tabisuru keshiki dake wo kokoro ni egaite
    mou ichido deau tame ni
    tada nemutta

    moshimo sora ni kagayaku tou he to noboretanara
    anata wo mitsukerareru kashira

    tsubasa wa naku koe wa shagare
    kaojo wa izure kawariyuu
    kodoku wo iyasu nukumori wo motomeru
    majou he to覧覧
    yuki no naka ni araware sari yuku kanojo no te ga
    itoshii maboroshi wo nazotta

    ikudo mo kuri kaesu toki
    kisetsu ga nando megurou to
    watashi wa "haru" to yonda no wa anata dake datta

    koori ga toketa sono setsuna
    kanojo wa koi wo shite
    keshite kanawanai yume wo kokoro ni kizanda
    arata na noroi wo

    English :
    The girl who got awakened by the sound of thin (meaning: thin ice) dividing
    Placed hazy memories over a sigh

    The music that resounds into the forest that stops the long winter
    Along with the strummed melody

    The boy who erased the curse
    Whilst within the detested sadness
    Melts even the frozen tears
    A kind sunny spot

    Draws only the scenery he travels on the heart
    So that once again would meet
    Simply sleeps

    If able to climb up the tower that shines in the sky
    Would be able to find you?

    Wings cries, voice hoarse
    The girl would eventually yearn for warmth that heals the changing solitude
    Towards the witch覧覧

    The girls hand that appears and disappears within the snow
    Traced the dear illusion

    The time (meaning: destiny) that repeats many times
    However much the season turns over
    The one i call "Spring" was only you

    The moment when the ice has melt
    The girl loves
    Carved the dream that won't come true into the heart
    A new curse

    Thanky ou in advance !

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    Default Re: Help on checking and uploading Canoue - 氷の魔女は眠る Koori no Majou wa Nemuru

    Shoo thang! I'll take this on since I'm a Canoue fan.

    I can't use your translation right or wrong however, as that is against the site policy.
    Feel free to compare the translation differences when I am done.


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    Default Re: Help on checking and uploading Canoue - 氷の魔女は眠る Koori no Majou wa Nemuru

    Quote Originally Posted by MaxP View Post
    It can't be compared this way. You should probably concentrate on your own.
    Hmm, I forgot about this song. I'll try to get to it on the weekend.

    I don't really get what you mean though?
    Lines may not be word for word, but they will always mean the same thing if the translation is correct.
    The whole point of my original statement was that I AM concentrating on my own.

    Sorry, but I'm not getting paid to review someone's entire translation. If I am going to find the time to do that, then I may as well translate the whole thing myself since I have to mentally translate the original lyrics anyway.

    I don't know if you're another user or the original poster of the thread, but if you're looking for someone to look at a translation, this isn't the place. This is a lyric discussion thread for site approved translators to gain clarity on their translations/transliterations before submission. It's a community effort.
    If you're planning on doing that here then go ahead, but if you want to have something reviewed for your own personal use, you should probably ask on the Japanese Stack Exchange or something.
    Last edited by Hikarin; 10-23-2019 at 07:21 AM.


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