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[Raichu]

Some romaji corrections:

v2 l2 kuukijuu → kuukichuu (it sounds like it plus it makes more sense to me)
v3 l1 marude is one word
vv4,10,11 I think deshika is two words de shika
v8 I usually write mitasou as one word (though some Japanese speakers write it as two)
v10 uto → uta

Can we also add links in the description?

• Original: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm1928246
• Remake: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19286034
• MEIKO V3: http://youtu.be/Aa0GBuB7DkQ

EDIT: oopsy forgot link to the song

[Fuukanou]

Thanks for the correction report.


While the first and fifth were undeniably corrections and the second one as a fair enough correction (could mistake meaning from it), I think the third and fourth ones probably fell into our "it's the transcriber's choice" bracket. IIRC bluepenguin doesn't like split verb stem/conjugation so I allowed number four; and while I can't think of any reason why not to allow 'deshika', I agree it probably should be two words so I'll trust your judgement on it.


tl;dr I made all the corrections but I was on the fence about some of them.

[Raichu]

I just checked (I should have checked before) but there's no deshika word in weblio.jp (they use the 三省堂 dictionary which is highly respected, I even got myself a paper copy!) so I don't think it exists as a compound word or anything. It's probably just a mistake.


NB there's still one instance of deshika left.

Yes some people prefer to write 満たそう as two words which is why I wasn't insistent about it.

[Fuukanou]

Alright thanks, I've corrected that last stray 'deshika'.