Brand New Morning: Kamisama kazoku

[Hapayon]

In the last bit of the lyrics, the chorus repeats but is slightly altered.
The current translation is:

My voice crosses over the world.
I bet it will reach you someday.
Even if my dream ages when I take a deep sigh,
Please make it so I won't forget it.
My fingers can touch everything,
I just ride on the wind, and I can reach inside of the light.

But it Should be:

Your voice crosses/resounds over the world
I bet it will reach me someday
Even if my dream ages when I take a deep sigh
Please make it so I don't forget it
My fingers can touch/reach you,
Riding on the wind toward the inside of the light

[Fuukanou]

Please post the link to the page next time
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/kam...newmorning.htm

[Hapayon]

Sorry, I just registered and forgot to put the link.

[crazipink]

lol, great translation

[EJTranslations]

Thanks! I've changed the translations of all the lines that are different from the previous iteration of the chorus. If you want to make more extensive changes than that, which it looks like you might, first of all you would need to pass the translation test (https://www.animelyrics.com/index.php?action=jptest) and second I would need to contact the original translator and wait until she responds or a month has passed, whichever comes first.