Eromanga-sensei OP and Uchouten Kazoku ED
Eromanga-sensei's opening theme by ClariS
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ero...hitorigoto.htm
According to http://www.uta-net.com/song/228311/ the format of the songs are wrong.
Line 2 and 3 should be on the same line:
Kimi no koto da yo demo sono saki wa iwanai kedo ne
Line 5 and 6 should be on the same line:
Kakechigaeteru botan mitai na modokashisa wo
Line 7 and 8 should be on the same line:
Hodokenai mama mata muzukashiku shiyou to shiteru
Line 12 and 13 should be on the same line (also the "..." at the back):
Tameiki to issho ni nomikondara horonigai...
Line 17 and 18 should be on the same line:
Muishiki no naka sono riyuu wa mada ienai kedo
Line 22 (no comma, and "Ah" is at the end of the line, note it is "Ah" and not "aa"):
Error: Tatta HITOKOTO nee, doushite
Corrections: Tatta HITOKOTO nee doushite Ah
There shouldn't be an empty line between Line 22 and 24
Line 24 and 25 should be on the same line (without the first "Ah") and the another Ah is at end of line:
Ienai sono kotoba ienai kono kimochi Ah
No "Ah" on line 26:
Error: Aa hayaku kizuite hoshii no ni
Corrections: Hayaku kizuite hoshii no ni
Line 32 and 33 should be on the same line (note the astrophe jikoken'o to differentiate お from の):
Kawaikunai kao misete jikoken'o + gokai de
Maybe changing "+" to "purasu" would be better?
Line 34 and 35 should be on the same line (also the "..." at the back):
Tamekonda "gomen ne" wo hakidasu ni wa hodotooi...
Line 37
Error: Mimi wi sumaseba kikoete kuru yo
Corrections: Mimi wo sumaseba kikoete kuru yo
There should be an empty line between Line 39 and Line 40.
Line 42
Tanjun na koto demo doushite Ah
There is no empty line between Line 42 and 44.
Line 44 and 45 on same line
ienai sono kotoba ienai kono kimochi Ah
Line 46 (No Ah)
Motto sunao ni naritai
Line 48
Nakidashisou na soramoyou...
There is no extra (soramoyou) in brackets in the lyrics, but it was sung in the song
Line 49 (no "..." after hitotsubu)
Error: Hoho ni hitotsubu... ame kana? (ame kana?)
Corrections: Hoho ni hitotsubu ame kana...
There is no extra (ame kana) in brackets in the lyrics, but it was sung in the song
There is no empty line between line 51 and 53
Line 53 (no "...")
Kimi no koto hontou wa zutto Ah
Line 57 and 58 should be on the same line:
Muishiki no naka sono riyuu wa mada ienai kedo
Line 62 (no comma, and "Ah" is at the end of the line, note it is "Ah" and not "aa"):
Error: Tatta HITOKOTO nee, doushite
Corrections: Tatta HITOKOTO nee doushite Ah
There shouldn't be an empty line between Line 62 and 64
Line 64 and 65 should be on the same line (without the first "Ah") and the another Ah is at end of line:
Ienai sono kotoba ienai kono kimochi Ah
No "Ah" on line 66:
Error: Aa hayaku kizuite hoshii no ni
Corrections: Hayaku kizuite hoshii no ni
The kanji lyrics are also in the wrong format as well and some words are in katakana.
I actually submitted the lyrics before but I was too late.
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One small error in Uchouten Kazoku 2 ED:
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/uch.../moonriver.htm
Line 12
Error: kimi ga kuzutsuku toki mo
Corrections: kimi ga kizutsuku toki mo
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