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    Default Yonezu Kenshi - FURAWAAUOORU

    Some small corrections:

    1st stanza-
    ano hi kimi ni deaeta sono toki kara
    toumei no chi ga bokura futari ni kayoi
    kanashimi mo yasashisa mo kibou mo mata zetsubou mo
    wakaaeru you ni natta

    4th, 9th, 14th and 17th stanzas-
    Furawaawooru (the "sou" is not needed this line anywhere in the song)

    7th stanza-
    kono amari ni hiroi sekai de bokutachi wa
    imi mo naku onaji basho ni tatteita no ni
    boku no kaketa tokoro to kimi no kaketa tokoro [wo]<---not needed
    nazeka otagai ni motteita

    8th stanza-
    doushite bokura wa
    meguriaeta no ka
    sono tame dake ni
    umaretekita you na

    10th stanza-
    hitori de wa
    katazukerarenai mono darou to
    kimi ga ite kuretara hora
    kagirinai zetsubou mo kotae ga dasenai toi mo zenbu
    hitotsu zutsu irozuiteiku

    11th stanza-
    hanasenainda moshimo te wo hanaseba
    nido to tsukamenai you na ki ga shite

    19th stanza-
    sore wo bokura wa unmei to yobinagara
    itsumademo te wo tsunaideita

    Also this is more of a suggestion but wouldn't it be better if the original title was stylized simply as "Flowerwall", as it seems to be the official title?

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    Default Re: Yonezu Kenshi - FURAWAAUOORU

    Fixed, thank you!

    @violetclockworker , where did you find the Japanese lyrics you based this transliteration on? It seems like it might not have been a very reliable source, and in the future I'd recommend using somewhere like Kasi-Time, J-Lyric, or Uta-Net.

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    Default Re: Yonezu Kenshi - FURAWAAUOORU

    While you're at it, @bluepenguin , could you fix a line of Eine Kleine as well? This was my own mistake, but the (translation) 14th stanza should be

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    Sure, no problem.

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