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    Default Arcana Famiglia 2 - Promessa

    I don't really have specific questions, so I'm just going to bold the lines that I'm unsure of, or that I think are terribly worded but can't think of a way to improve.

    苔むした断崖に 枝葉を広げた樹
    太陽に焼かれ 雨に身を削がれ

    kokemushita dangai ni edaha o hirogeta ki
    taiyou ni yakare ame ni mi o sogare

    A tree spread its leaves and branches on a mossy cliff
    The sun beats down on it and the rain weakens its body

    それでも生きてゆく
    刻まれた年輪を
    まとい続けてく
    時が許すまで

    soredemo ikite yuku
    kizamareta nenrin o
    matoitsudzukete'ku
    toki ga yurusu made

    But it's still alive
    It keeps engraving
    More rings on itself
    As long as time allows

    生きとし生けるすべて
    出逢うたびカルマがまた重なる

    ikitoshi ikeru subete
    deau tabi KARUMA ga mata kasanaru

    For every living being,
    Their karma overlaps when they meet

    Promised me
    生まれ変わるその日まで
    壊せない約束
    一握りの灰と化しても
    護りたい

    Promised me
    umarekawaru sono hi made
    kowasenai yakusoku
    hitonigiri no hai to kashite mo
    mamoritai

    Promised me
    This promise won't be broken
    Until the day when we're reborn
    Even if it turns to ash in my hand
    I want to keep it

    Promised you
    生まれ堕ちたこの荒野
    微かな未来の鼓動
    足跡ごと世界は
    動き始める

    Promised you
    umareochita kono kouya
    kasuka na mirai no kodou
    ashiatogoto sekai wa
    ugokihajimeru

    Promised you
    In this wilderness we were born into
    Is the faint heartbeat of the future
    With each footstep
    The world begins to move

    古い辞書のように 忘れられた日々も
    “約束”のページの文字は消えはしない

    furui jisho no you ni wasurerareta hibi mo
    "yakusoku" no PEEJI no moji wa kie wa shinai

    Like an old dictionary, even in the forgotten days
    The mark on the page for "promise" won't fade

    確かにそこにある
    埃をかぶっても

    tashika ni soko ni aru
    hokori o kabutte mo

    It will surely be there
    Even if it's covered in dust

    呼吸を続ける
    いつか果たすまで

    kokyuu o tsudzukeru
    itsuka hatasu made

    I'll keep breathing
    Until someday I fulfill it

    待つだけ待とう
    やがて海路の日和がオールを誘う

    matsu dake matou
    yagate kairo no hiyori ga OORU o izanau

    I'll keep waiting
    And soon the sea conditions will beckon to my oars

    Promised me
    終わらない旅の途中
    果てしない年月
    頭上の月 満ち欠けるだけ
    それでいい

    Promised me
    owaranai tabi no tochuu
    hateshinai nengetsu
    zujou no tsuki michikakeru dake
    sore de ii

    Promised me
    In the midst of an endless journey
    The months and years are infinite
    If the moon above my head waxes and wanes
    That's enough for me

    Promised you
    踏み出した踵の衝動
    再び抱く決意
    モノクロームの大地に
    芽吹き始める

    Promised you
    fumidashita kibisu no shoudou
    futatabi idaku ketsui
    MONOKUROOMU no daiichi de
    mebukihajimeru

    Promised you
    The impulse of the heel that stepped forward
    The determination I embrace a second time

    Starts to bloom
    On the monochrome earth

    陽はまた昇り 鳥は囀り
    断崖の樹は 在り続ける
    朽ち果てて土に還るため
    生まれたんじゃない
    生きてるんじゃない

    hi wa mata nobori tori wa saezuri
    dangai no ki wa aritsudzukeru
    kuchihatete tsuchi ni kaeru tame
    umareta n'ja nai
    ikite'ru n'ja nai

    The sun rises again, the birds sing
    And the tree on the cliff is still there
    We weren't born
    We aren't living
    Just to decay and return to dust

    Promised me
    生まれ変わるその日まで
    壊せない約束
    一握りの灰と化しても
    護りたい

    Promised me
    umarekawaru sono hi made
    kowasenai yakusoku
    hitonigiri no hai to kashite mo
    mamoritai

    Promised me
    This promise won't be broken
    Until the day when we're reborn
    Even if it turns to ash in my hand
    I want to keep it

    Promised you
    生まれ堕ちたこの荒野
    微かな未来の鼓動
    足跡ごと世界は
    動き始める

    Promised you
    umareochita kono kouya
    kasuka na mirai no kodou
    ashiatogoto sekai wa
    ugokihajimeru

    Promised you
    In this wilderness we were born into
    Is the faint heartbeat of the future
    With each footstep
    The world begins to move
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    Default Re: Arcana Famiglia 2 - Promessa

    >待つだけ待とう
    >I'll keep waiting

    You could maybe go with "I'll wait as long as I have to..." if you don't like your current translation, but I personally think it looks fine the way it is now.

    Quote Originally Posted by bluepenguin View Post
    生まれたんじゃない
    生きてるんじゃない
    umareta n'ja nai
    umarete'ru n'ja nai
    Just a small correction - ikiterun'janai.

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    Default Re: Arcana Famiglia 2 - Promessa

    Quote Originally Posted by Haze~ View Post
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    Just a small correction - ikiterun'janai.
    Fffff, I swear I listened to the song to check my transliteration and everything.

    Thanks!

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