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    Round my finger
    I twirl my hair
    As round my life
    You come here and there.
    The tides lapping
    Up and down
    As my feelings
    Breathe and drown.
    Luna up high
    Waxing and waning
    As I wonder
    Is my love fading?


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    Default Re: Orbit

    My guess, yes.

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    Default Re: Orbit

    I like it. Simple, yet meaningful, also happy about linking emotion with lifeless cycles of nature. Was there purpose to make each line flow like tides, give it a visual form?

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    Default Re: Orbit

    Yes! I was actually thinking about tides when I came up with the poem. So while I was writing it I was visualizing the tide coming and going. I was thinking about naming it Tides but I thought Orbit sounded better.


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