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    Default Hope by Yuyoyuppe

    Just about everything in the translation is off (or very off). Here's a link to it as well if it helps.

    I'll just mention the most obvious errors for the sake of saving time here. Somehow, this line...
    "kimi ga mada waratteru"

    Was translated as...
    "You're the best person to have ever lived You're smiling even now"

    There are other small yet still glaring errors like this...
    "zutto tsuzuku shiawase dato"

    Being translated as
    "Let our luck always continue"

    When "luck" wasn't in the line at all.


    My translation:

    Where am I? White, Black
    I wanted to see you
    Yet why am I just shedding tears?
    In the depths of my heart are memories that have been closed away
    My voice that cannot reach you echoes

    Continuing with you was happiness
    That was what I thought
    But the light known as "you" faded away
    And long nights came upon me...

    You are still laughing
    So full of tenderness
    I've locked it inside my heart
    That precious smile of yours

    Disappearing, Living
    Being born, Dying
    What I discovered
    Was your light
    But it is no longer here

    You are still laughing
    So full of tenderness
    I've locked it inside my heart
    That precious smile of yours


    (Hope I did all of this okay!)

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    Default Re: Hope by Yuyoyuppe

    Thanks! It looks like the original translator hasn't been around since 2010, and as you say, the translation is really off, so I'm going to go ahead and replace it with yours.

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    Default Re: Hope by Yuyoyuppe

    Thank you!

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