correction for Miku-Miku ni Shite Ageru

[Raichu]

OOPSY the thread title should be correction for Miku-Miku ni Shite Ageru

Miku-Miku ni Shite Ageru

This has also been translated by Damesukekun, a native speaker, on Vocaloid Lyrics Wiki.

For the fourth verse

mikumiku ni shite yan yo
saigo made ne, ganbaru kara
mikumiku ni shite yan yo
dakara chotto yudan wo shite agete

ArtemisA has for lines 2 and 4:

...
Until the end, so I'll endure
...
So please cut me some slack

but I agree with Damesukekun's translation:

...
I'll hang in until the very end
...
So I'll be off guard for you

In line 2 kara follows ganbaru, so enduring is the reason, not the result.
In line 4, ageru indicates what she is doing something for someone else.

In verse 1, ArtemisA has "I would like some [leek]", but given what we know about Miku, I think the intent is most likely "I would like one" (as also Damesukekun).

With verse 2, I think the original is ambiguous and both ArtemisA's and Damesukekun's translations seem possible to me.

[EJTranslations]

@ArtemisA ?

[EJTranslations]

Whoops, this kind of slipped my mind and now we're two weeks past the one-month limit. I've made the requested changes, thank you.