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    Default Snow rain - Kana Ueda

    There are some minor but significant errors in the translation: はなれえぬ is used in the negative sense (since -ぬ is essentially equivalent to -ない), but the translation apparently missed this point.

    In addition, it makes more sense to translate 祝福の風 as "the wind granting benediction" but not "the blessed wind."

    With these in mind, I would like to correct part of its translation.

    Original:

    The wish of the blessed wind
    Is unrequited love

    New:

    Embodied with its wish, the wind carries its benediction
    towards the everlasting bond far, far away

    Original:

    The road of the blessed wind
    Go onwards with a smile

    New:

    In the journey, amidst the wind granting its benediction,
    I go onwards with a smile

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    Default Re: Snow rain - Kana Ueda

    Quote Originally Posted by fMegrez View Post
    There are some minor but significant errors in the translation: はなれえぬ is used in the negative sense (since -ぬ is essentially equivalent to -ない), but the translation apparently missed this point.

    In addition, it makes more sense to translate 祝福の風 as "the wind granting benediction" but not "the blessed wind."

    With these in mind, I would like to correct part of its translation.

    Original:

    The wish of the blessed wind
    Is unrequited love

    New:

    Embodied with its wish, the wind carries its benediction
    towards the everlasting bond far, far away

    Original:

    The road of the blessed wind
    Go onwards with a smile

    New:

    In the journey, amidst the wind granting its benediction,
    I go onwards with a smile
    Thanks! Can you link me to the lyrics page?

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