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    Default Aria the Avennire - Piacere

    While it's still up, you can listen to the song on Soundcloud here.

    静かな青 遥か消える雲に 願うの
    二人の朝 さあ出発しましょう 旅立ちの刻(とき)

    I make a wish to the clouds fading into the distant blue
    The two of us in the morning - come, it's time to set off

    さあ ともに 漕ぎ出すの
    少しずつ 少しずつ 行きましょう

    Now we'll row away together
    Slowly but surely, let us go

    そう 気付いた いつも
    見守ってくれた いまは姿 ここには無くても
    そう 幸せ それは
    あなたが教えてくれたの 忘れない 今思い届く
    永遠(とわ)へ

    Yes, I've come to realize
    That you were always watching over me, even though you're no longer here
    Yes, happiness is
    Something you taught me - I won't forget
    Now or ever

    囁く星 闇に映える月に 思うの
    二人の夜 さあ探し出しましょう 思い出の影

    I think of the whispering stars and the moon shining through the darkness
    The two of us in the night - come, let's look for the shadows/traces of our memories

    そう 今日も 繰り返す
    漕いでゆく 漕いでゆく 未来へと

    Yes, today, once again
    We'll row on and on towards the future

    ゆらめく灯が 水面の上で 揺らいだ
    聞こえた あの日の鐘 響いた
    少しずつ 少しずつ ココロの中

    Flickering lights swayed on the water surface
    The bells I heard that day resonated
    Slowly but surely, in my heart

    そう 気付いた ここで
    傍にいてくれる たとえ声が聞こえてなくても
    そう 幸せ 明日も
    あなたが 繋げてくれたの 忘れない 夢望み紡ぐ
    永遠へ

    Yes, I've come to realize
    That you're here by my side, even if I can't hear your voice
    Yes, I'm happy
    That you've connected me to tomorrow - I won't forget
    And my hopes and dreams weave into the future

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    Would appreciate feedback, in particular regarding the choice between shadows/traces and what to do (if applicable) about the awkward line breaks in the chorus. Thanks.

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    Default Re: Aria the Avennire - Piacere

    Re: the line breaks in the chorus, if you weren't terribly fussy about keeping things on the same line as their Japanese counterparts as much as possible, I think it would be fairly easy to maintain the line count while breaking the lines in more natural places, something like this:

    Yes, I've come to realize that you were always watching over me
    Even though you're no longer here
    Yes, happiness is something you taught me -
    I won't forget
    Now or ever

    Also, your translation of the first line seems to have skipped "静かな", by the way.

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