Sound Horizon - Track 44

[Haze~]

I found this extra Elysion bonus track, and thought I'd take a stab at it. Any feedback would be appreciated! (Also, it doesn't really appear to have a name besides "Track 44", so when submitting it, should I just write that as the song's title?)

Romaji:

"Tadaima... ERU..."
"Okaerinasai... Papa..."

Sono otoko no mounen ga eien wo haramaseru naraba
Monogatari to iu rekishi wa ikudo demo kurikaesareru darou

----Decadence e to itaru gensou haitoku wo tsumugitsuzukeru Romance
Itami wo daku tabi ni umaretekuru daiyon no chiheisen
Sono shinjitsu no na wa----

English:

"I'm home... El..."
"Welcome home... Papa..."

If that man's delusions will give birth to eternity,
The history known as "story" will likely be repeated many times again.

----A fantasy leading to decadence; a romance continuously weaving immorality...
The fourth horizon, born with each embracement of pain -
Its true name, is----

Kanji:

「ただいま…エル…」
「お帰りなさい…お父様(パパ)…」

その男の妄念が　永遠を孕ませるならば
物語という歴史は　幾度でも繰り返されるだろう

──退廃(Decadence)へと至る幻想　背徳を紡ぎ続ける恋物語(Romance)
痛みを抱く度に生まれてくる　第四の地平線
その真実の名は──