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    Default Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/kam...pycrescent.htm

    だけどあなたの 為に頑張る
    いつの日にか 振り向かせてみせるわ

    But I will try hard for you
    Someday I will make things turn
    But I'll do my best for you
    One day I'll make you look back at me
    "Try hard" really isn't used very often in English, but this is more stylistic

    On the other hand, "furimukaseru" definitely means "make you turn and face me" and is I think the only Japanese mistake in this translation.

    いつか終わるの? ねぇ抱きしめて欲しい 片想い

    Hey, I want you to hold me, when it will end this...? unrequited love
    When will it end? Hey, I just want you to hold me... unrequited love
    "When will it end this" isn't how English works. (Note: this appears in two places)

    いつになるだろ? ねぇ終わらせたいよ 片想い

    When it will be? I want you to end this... unrequited love
    When will it happen? I just want to end this... unrequited love
    〜たい means "want to do 〜", not "want someone else to do 〜".

    The rest is just weird-sounding English; I can retranslate if you want me to.

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    @kgw please respond.

    ...so that you know where you can find me

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    Been around a month, so I'm going to poke this so we don't forget about it.

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    I think a month is long enough to wait. @AzureDark , okay with you? (Do we have an official policy on how long to wait for an original translator to respond? If not, we probably should.)

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    afaik I _did_ set it to one month and wrote it somewhere. Just remember to make the effort to PM @kgw yourself first, but if you did and they haven't responded, please go ahead with replacing the correction.

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    Hello. I just received a PM about this. I actually do not have the time to correct my own lyrics or add some news. So feel free to make any correction you need. Sorry about that.
    Also, I should remind you that English is not my mother tongue.

    Good luck.
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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    Quote Originally Posted by AzureDark View Post
    afaik I _did_ set it to one month and wrote it somewhere.
    Did you? I swear I checked the Correction Guidelines and it wasn't there, but I could just be blind. I'd been doing one month anyway, since it seemed like a sensible amount of time to wait, but now that you're back I just wanted to ensure it was fine with you too.

    Quote Originally Posted by kgw View Post
    Hello. I just received a PM about this. I actually do not have the time to correct my own lyrics or add some news. So feel free to make any correction you need. Sorry about that..
    Thanks for responding!

    @Serei , would you like to retranslate or should I just go ahead and make the changes in your original post?

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    Quote Originally Posted by bluepenguin View Post
    @Serei , would you like to retranslate or should I just go ahead and make the changes in your original post?
    Can we do both? Make my suggested changes now, and I'll do a full retranslation in a week or two?

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    Default Re: Happy Crescent - Kaminomi (correction)

    Sure, no problem.

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