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    Default MIRACLE RUSH - Saki Achiga-hen (correction)

    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sak...iraclerush.htm

    I submitted a translation, but there's a typo in the romaji:
    watashirashii joujou shikou daiji ni shitai
    should be
    watashirashii joushou shikou daiji ni shitai
    Since you want a full corrected version, I'm also wary of "hagemashitekurete" rather than "hagemashite kurete", and "na nda" instead of "nanda". を is nearly always pronounced "wo" in songs, so I'm making those changes too:
    kagayaite koko ichiban jibun no chokkan wo shinjite
    uketotta MIRACLE RUSH
    ima saikou no kiseki ni norikome

    joudan ja nai, wakaru desho (you know?)
    yudan dekinai kono jijou (good luck)
    kyuukyoku no sentaku wa eien no torauma

    kachimake ja nai kireigoto (I know)
    hagemashite kurete arigato (thank you)
    saigo ni wa jibun nanda kakugo kimenakucha

    ki ni naru sajesuchon
    rikutsu wa tokidoki muryoku de jirenma...
    nagasarete mite mo ii no ka mo?

    unmei ga mawaridasu detatoko shoubu de hajimeru no
    kokoro no junbi no arunashi wa matte kurenai
    kagayaite koko ichiban jibun no chokkan wo shinjite
    uketotta MIRACLE RUSH
    ima saikou no kiseki ni norikome

    sono chikamichi wa ari ka mo ne (danger!?)
    wanawana shitete moechau yo (nice choice!)
    haadoru no kanjikata tamesareteru mitai

    soko wa tegataku daitan ni (of course)
    asobigokoro mo wasurezu ni (my way)
    anpai ja tsumannai ne wari to gyanburaa

    jitai wa sadisutikku?
    makeru ki wa sarasara nai no it's all right
    tsuyoki na kurai ga choudo ii!

    unmei ga ugokidasu shinken shoubu de susumunda
    watashirashii joushou shikou daiji ni shitai
    shinpai wa atomawashi riaru na mondai ga saki desho
    itsu datte makasete ne
    hora saishin no watashi ga saikyou

    yomenai mirai tesaguri nara
    shiritai kitai sasowarechae
    kimetai desho tsugi no chansu
    semeteku shisei ga kanjin da ne!
    My name is kitto lucky girl, YES? NO? YES!! YES!!

    unmei ga mawaridasu detatoko shoubu de hajimeru no
    kokoro no junbi no arunashi wa matte kurenai
    kagayaite koko ichiban jibun no chokkan wo shinjite
    uketotta MIRACLE RUSH
    ima saikou no kiseki ni norikome

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    Default Re: MIRACLE RUSH - Saki Achiga-hen (correction)

    I appreciate your enthusiasm and your desire to make sure the lyrics on the site are of the best possible quality, but actually, generally we don't want a full corrected version for something like this with a single minor error. As I believe I mentioned in one of your previous threads, the general rule of thumb for when we need a complete retranslation/transliteration is three or more errors, though the magnitude of the errors is also taken into account. In this case, every change except "joujou"->"joushou" is stylistic stuff which you may personally dislike, but which is not technically wrong. Even if we could agree on a single set of rules for transliterations, which frankly would be a lot more effort than it was worth, trying to go retroactively make all the transliterations match would be immensely time-consuming and, again, not really worthwhile, so you can relax a little bit about trying to make things consistent. I'd rather not fix what's not broken.

    Anyway, putting a full translation/translit in the first post is indeed helpful when the original is clearly so inaccurate that replacing it would be easier than fixing it, but in cases like this where the errors are fewer and/or more minor, I would rather you made your case for what needs fixing, concentrating on actual errors and not matters of stylistic preference, and then if I think a full new version is needed, I'll let you know. In this case, I have fixed the mistake, but am leaving the rest alone.

    Thanks!

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    Default Re: MIRACLE RUSH - Saki Achiga-hen (correction)

    Quote Originally Posted by bluepenguin View Post
    I appreciate your enthusiasm and your desire to make sure the lyrics on the site are of the best possible quality, but actually, generally we don't want a full corrected version for something like this with a single minor error.
    Hi, the only reason I've been posting full versions is because the Correction Guidelines:

    http://www.animeforum.com/showthread...ion-Guidelines

    say I need "The complete draft of the revised lyric." That's the only reason I've been posting them. I can stop if you'd like, but you should probably clarify the Correction Guidelines, too.

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    Default Re: MIRACLE RUSH - Saki Achiga-hen (correction)

    Ah, I'm sorry, my bad! It's been a while since I looked at the correction guidelines, I admit, and I suppose I, and other forum participants, have gotten into certain habits that don't align with the letter of the law.

    I don't have forum admin powers, so I can neither edit that post nor make a new sticky, so I'll leave it as is--just be aware that I may not use your full corrected version if I don't think it's necessary.

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