Cross Ange - Towagatari ~Kaze no Uta~ [transliteration]

[bambooXZX]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/cro...gatarikaze.htm

This seems to have been transliterated without listening to the song (not that the errors are actual alternate readings...).

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Kaze ni toban el ragna Sadame to chigiri kawashite
Kaze ni yukan el ragna Todorokishi tsubasa

Hoshi ni toban el ragna Banri wo koete kanata e
Hoshi ni yukan el ranga Setsuna... Eikyuu wo //ranga -> ragna, Eikyuu -> Yuukyuu

Nagare nagare itsukushimu
Mata seishi no yurikago de yawaku
Awadatsu

Aa... Sen no toki no Rinne no tabi
Tsunagi au Te to te sagashi motome
Kokoro kawashi Ibuku kaze yo
Arata na sekai wo tobe

Yume ni toban el ragna Kibou wa tobira no kagi ni
Yume ni yukan el ragna Hikari sasu hou e

Subete wa mu e no awadatsu //awadatsu -> utakata
Tada kaiki no habataki ni
Kiete kaeran

Aa... Shin no yoake Kumo wo kitte
Tenkuu no Itadaki ni noboran

Tsui no hana wa Hakanakikana
Kono mi wo ai ni sasagu

Nanji, yuuki wo kazashite Kaihou no ubugoe //ubugoe -> ubugoe wo
Soshite akatsuki tasogare
Towa e no kaze e

[EJTranslations]

Thanks. Do you want to post a complete retransliteration?

[bambooXZX]

Mm, I think just making the changes directly would suffice, unless a full retransliteration would actually make things easier on your end. It's just a few scattered changes, and honestly I don't have any sources of original Japanese that are reliable enough to justify (regarding accuracy) reexamining more than that.

If it works better for you, though, I can do one.

[EJTranslations]

It would be a bit easier on my end, but if you'd rather not, especially given the lack of a reliable source for the original lyrics, that's fine.

[bambooXZX]

Actually, it turns out there was at least one semi-reliable source, kasi-time. Either I'm bad at searching or it appeared after I noticed this.

Here's a full retransliteration, in my own romaji style. (Note: kasi-time has no line break between the lines beginning with 'Tenkuu' and 'Tsui', but there is one in the English translation so I matched that.)

Kaze ni toban el ragna   unmei to chigirikawashite
Kaze ni yukan el ragna   todoroki shi tsubasa

Hoshi ni toban el ragna   banri wo koete kanata e
Hoshi ni yukan el ragna   setsuna... yuukyuu wo

Nagare nagare itsukushimu
Mata seishi no yurikago de yawaku
Awadatsu

Aa... sen no toki no   rinne no tabi
Tsunagiau   te to te sagashimotome
Kokoro kawashi   ibuku kaze yo
Arata na sekai wo tobe

Yume ni toban el ragna   kibou wa tobira no kagi ni
Yume ni yukan el ragna   hikari sasu hou e

Subete wa mu e no utakata
Tada kaiki no habataki ni
Kiete kaeran

Aa... shin no yoake   kumo wo kitte
Tenkuu no   itadaki ni noboran

Tsui no hana wa   hakanaki ka na
Kono mi wo ai ni sasagu

Nanji, yuuki wo kazashite   kaihou no ubugoe wo
Soshite akatsuki tasogare
Towa e no kaze e

Sen no toki no   rinne no tabi
Tsunagiau   te to te sagashimotome
Kokoro kawashi   ibuku kaze yo
Arata na sekai wo tobe

You know, seeing the kasi-time text reminds me... The weirdest part of this is that I recall, 泡沫 was explicitly followed by （うたかた） even in the JIS submission at one point...

Just wondering, though, is mewpudding actually inactive now? :V

[EJTranslations]

Thanks!

Mewpudding hasn't signed on in several months, but the reason I'm not pinging her is less that and more that the errors are numerous and significant enough to justify a redo regardless, especially as it's only a transliteration and so comes in for less of the fuzzy differences of interpretation that you get with translations that make it worthwhile to wait a few weeks to see if the original contributor wants to make an argument for their version.