LOVE KANON - Kaminomi (correction)

[Serine]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/kaminomi/lovekanon.htm

This is translated by the same user who did Happy Crescent, but it's mostly a really good translation with idiomatic English; it doesn't seem like the same person...

Anyway,

will make your heart beating fast

will make your heart beat fast

English grammar.

キラキラリ　光る
shinning sparklingly

sparkling brightly

Ignoring the misspelled "shining", "sparklingly" is awkward English.

[AzureDark]

I'll correct them without a credit change since these are only minor problems.