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    Default World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vo...orldismine.htm
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    http://www.animelyrics.com/game/prdiva2/worldismine.htm

    The English grammar/flow is kinda bad and the translation is a bit too word-for-word, but there are only a few outright mistakes.

    First:

    Ketten? Kawaii no machigai desho

    My fault? Let's call it a cute mistake
    "Kawaii no machigai" was misinterpreted to mean "cute mistake" but it actually means "mistaken for cuteness". "Fault" is also a bad translation for "ketten".

    A better translation would be:
    Flaw? I think you mistook my cuteness for a flaw
    Second:

    Touzen desu! Datte watashi wa

    It's natural! Even for me
    This translates "datte" to "even" but it's not being used as a particle here (if it were, it'd be "watashi datte"), it's being used as a conjunction, where it means "after all".

    So a better translation would be:
    Obviously! After all, I'm
    Third:

    "Come one," should be "Come on,"
    Last edited by Serei; 10-30-2015 at 03:44 AM.

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    Default Re: World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    @Hikarin ?

    (I've gone ahead and fixed the typo, though.)

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    Default Re: World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    Since it's now been a month with no response, @Serei , do you want to do a full translation? Or would you just like me to make the fixes already mentioned?

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    Default Re: World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    Yay! I get to translate World Is Mine!

    Sure, I'll retranslate it. Give me a week or so.

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    Default Re: World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    Here's my retranslation:
    I'm the greatest princess in the world
    So make sure you know exactly how I should be treated

    First, notice when my hairstyle is different from my usual
    Second, pay attention to what I'm wearing, down to my shoes
    Third, for every word I say, I expect three in response
    If you've got all that, my right hand isn't getting enough attention, so do something!

    It's not like I'm saying anything that selfish, after all
    I just want you to think I'm cute from the bottom of your heart

    I'm the greatest princess in the world
    Come on, just realize that already
    Keeping me waiting is unacceptable
    Just who do you think I am?
    I feel like eating something sweet!
    Right now!

    Flaw? I think you mistook my cuteness for a flaw
    You're not allowed to object here
    Hey, are you listening to me? Come on...
    Oh, that reminds me. You're getting a white horse, right?
    To come and take me away
    If you've got all that, kneel and take my hand and call me "Your Highness"

    It's not like I'm saying anything that selfish, after all
    But you know, it's also okay to scold me a little bit

    You're my only prince in the world
    When will you realize that?
    Both our hands are empty right now
    Untalkative and awkward prince
    Why won't you notice already?

    You definitely don't know anything! Anything at all...

    Shortcake with strawberries on top
    Custard made with only the best eggs
    I'll hold myself back from all of them...
    I don't want you to think I'm a spoiled girl
    I can do things like that too, you know
    You'll regret your words!

    It's obvious! After all,

    I'm the greatest princess in the world
    If you don't watch me carefully, I'll wander off somewhere
    I suddenly feel arms around me – what's going on?
    "It's dangerous, you could've gotten run over!" you tell me, looking away
    ...But what's really dangerous is being in your arms

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    Default Re: World Is Mine - Hatsune Miku (correction)

    All set, thank you!

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