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    Default Celebrate / Utada Hikaru

    I'm attempting this song, and I'd love to get feedback on how it looks. Thanks in advance! (:

    The turqoise blue night
    Exists (just) for us
    >Not sure if I should just leave the 'just' out, since the kanji pretty much says 'Exists for us'.

    Don't read too much into it
    Just enjoy the art of life

    Mister DJ the rythm of this song is nice
    Turn it up more turn it, turn it up more
    Sexy lady your backless dress
    suits you well- you're number one!

    Celebrate bathed in light
    If we dive into the sea of green, we can be anything
    Celebrate pop open the Dom Perignon
    When I'm dyed in gold down to my lungs, I feel like a queen
    >Most puzzled about this line- I'm not quite sure if I've got it right.

    The beast held in your gentle eyes awakens
    Mister DJ the rhythm of this song is nice
    Turn it up more turn it, turn it up more
    Sexy lady your backless dress
    suits you well- you're number one!

    Celebrate on a hill where you can see the moon
    Let's make our vows tonight- a secret wedding
    Celebrate come over here
    Because I understand what it's like to have always been crying alone
    >Structure seems a little awkward, not sure if I've got it right.

    Stop time

    Celebrate bathed in light
    If we dive into the sea of green, we can be anything
    Celebrate pop open the Dom Perignon
    When I'm dyed in gold down to my lungs, I feel like a queen

    Ah I love the way
    You make me feel the music
    Ah it's strange, isn't it? Even though it can't be touched, we feel it.
    >I feel like using some other word, like 'marvelous', but I'm not sure if it'd sit well. Strange just feels a little...flat.

    Kanji:

    ターコイズブルーの夜
    ぼくたちのためにある

    深読みなんかしないで
    Just enjoy the art of life

    Mister DJ この歌調子いいね
    もっとあげて もっともっとあげて
    Sexy lady 背中のあいた dress
    似合ってるね おまえがナンバーワンだぜ

    Celebrate 光を浴びて
    緑の海に飛び込んだら なんにでもなれる
    Celebrate ドンペリ開けて
    肺までゴールドに染まったら 女王様気分

    優しい瞳を持つ化け物が目を覚ます
    Mister DJ この歌調子いいね
    もっとあげて もっともっとあげて
    Sexy lady 背中のあいた dress
    似合ってるね おまえがナンバーワンだぜ

    Celebrate 月の見える丘で
    今夜二人で誓い合うよ 秘密のウェディング
    Celebrate こっちへおいで
    ずっと一人で泣いてたこと分かってるから

    時間を止めて

    Celebrate 光を浴びて
    緑の海に飛び込んだら なんにでもなれる
    Celebrate ドンペリ開けて
    肺までゴールドに染まったら 女王様気分

    Ah I love the way
    You make me feel the music
    Ah 不思議ね 触れていないのに感じる

    できねぇ時?
    そん時ゃ諸共心中だよ





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    Default Re: Celebrate / Utada Hikaru

    Looking good overall!

    >The turqoise blue night
    Exists (just) for us

    I'm getting a 'just' feeling, too. If you think about it, 'us' is the ONLY thing it exists for,
    so it does make sense (If that just made sense?).

    When I'm dyed in gold down to my lungs, I feel like a queen
    >Most puzzled about this line- I'm not quite sure if I've got it right.

    Your interpretation looks fine to me.

    >The beast held in your gentle eyes awakens

    "The monster with the gentle eyes awakens."
    If there was a が in place of the を yours would be right.

    >Celebrate come over here
    Because I understand what it's like to have always been crying alone
    >Structure seems a little awkward, not sure if I've got it right.

    "Celebrate! Come over here;
    'Cause I know you've always been crying all alone/by yourself."
    Is what I think it means.

    >I feel like using some other word, like 'marvelous', but I'm not sure if it'd sit well. Strange just feels a little...flat.
    >Ah 不思議ね 触れていないのに感じる

    I think either one works fine. Though if I had to pick one, I'd lean toward 'strange', a bit more.
    Also, my take for 触れていないのに感じる is something more like, "Even though I'm not touching it, I [can] feel it."
    Last edited by Haze~; 05-14-2015 at 04:33 PM.

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    Default Re: Celebrate / Utada Hikaru

    That really helped me out. Thanks!

    EDIT: Really like the addition of exclamation marks behind Celebrate- I would never have thought of that, and they make it look so much better.
    Last edited by Rei; 05-15-2015 at 11:03 AM.

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