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    I`ve been working on with this for awhile...
    I founded this scan from Minitokyo and I just love it. :^_^:

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    i am not sure but the link did not work for me. Thanks.

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    Looks good but you might want to work on the perspective a little more. 1. The moon is too "real" for the wallpaper.
    2. The fog on the ground is too constant, chop it up a bit more so it looks more like fog.
    3. Clouds in the sky looks like it needs a lot more work since it's evening clouds.
    4. The shooting stars/falling comets can be more brighter in colour.

    It's a nice pic so far but it can be improved. All the best

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    I think it's a fabulous start, but could be even more improved by the little details.

    I agree with making the clouds more varied. For example, do many different fog layers and alter each of their transparencies. I dont know if the shooting stars should be brighter, but I think there could be more stars in the sky! Let a couple of them stand out, then make some faint stars.

    work on the depth of the wallpaper a bit and it will be great. it's a good wallpaper now, but can be better!

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    As well as what was said before there's some little jagged edges around some of the strands of her hair and parts of the bow. =3 Other than that, simply beautiful , I love the moon and the meteors and the way the text looks, good job.

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    Yepyep, I agree with the others, the clouds could use a bit more depth, brighten up the comets/stars, and maybe make the moon less "real" in a sense . Looks like you used my favourite font too It fit's really nicely here Great start, I can't wait for when it's done B)

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    Nice, I also like that font XD XD

    Anyway, agree with others :^_^:

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    Link didn't work for me as well. I guess I am not elite.

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    i cant get to see the image and btw, how to draw some nice clouds, more fog/smoke-like? i want to (try to) continue working on my old tsukihime wp, if i have time :\


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    I can't see the image..maybe you should upload here instead. I got the photobucket.com page instead of the image.

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    didnt notice it was photobucket...

    We have the image upload on the forum for a reason!!

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    another version (1.1).

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    i dont really think those comets are needed, and the fog could go till the bottom of the wp, not just a thin line. good job.


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    I like the moon. It's perfect to me.

    The clouds aren't helping thats for sure. I don't know if I'd even keep the clouds. Same with the fog.

    It's a very beautiful scan, extraction, and wallpaper.

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    the comets are kind of in-your-face. I was thinking that they could kind of be in the background; in the stars. does that make sense? Otherwise, tone them down a bit.

    The fog is looking better, but it seems to be a bit straight. give it some movement! think of how smoke moves from a fire or a cigarette; it's kind of wavy. if you are using photoshop, go to the shear option and bend it a bit. (if you dont understand, let me know. im out of it tonight)

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    The comets can stay, but I think you should put them behind the moon streaming down across the sky and add some sparkles like in the text there trailing off the comet. Other than that it looks good.

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    Fog and comets fixed.

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    much better!

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    yeah, it is way better now


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    Yeah, agree, much better :^_^:

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    wow, that looks so much better.....good job on it ^^

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    Sparkles always work good magic. Nice job!

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    Two thumbs up!
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    Looks great now.

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    Your protrael of a cute girl in space/ night is well done. It's great you fixed the comets.

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