[req] log horizon ed yun chi - your song

[Glenn Teie Kvelland]

Happy New Year everyone

Could someone please check the English translation for this song?


I found two English translations for this song, I don't think they look bad.
But need someone to check just in case, as I'm planning on adding subs to the music video in the near future.
http://www.jpopasia.com/celebrity/yu...ng::38485.html
and on http://www.kashigasa.com/yun-chi-you...romanized.html

[Glenn Teie Kvelland]

Alright, was hoping for some help here. But does not look like there is much luck in that.
So lets try this then, I'm adding the lyrics here in the order of Kanji, Romaji and English.
I have done nothing with the lyrics, except putting them in an excel document to line everything up and see if I had all the text. And then putting it up here

Maybe this gets more interest. If someone could check the quality of the translation I would be happy.

Kanji

ずっと　ずっと　ずっと

初めて君に触れた日　すごくドキドキした
だからついていこうって　心に決めた
花や風の香りも　このスープの匂いも
消えちゃっても一緒にいられたらいいや

聴こえる愛のうた　もっとそばにいさせて

聴こえる愛のうた　もっとそばにいさせて
色やかたちをかえ　守ってあげるわ
聴こえる愛のうた　みつめていられるなら
ぼやけた日々でさえ　愛しくなるわ
ずっと　ずっと　ずっと

傷ついている君に　声もかけれないの
せめてその背中を抱きしめたいよ

小さな　想いが　はじける　音がした

聴こえる愛のうた　もっとそばにいさせて
色やかたちをかえ　守ってあげるわ
聴こえる愛のうた　みつめていられるなら
ふわふわ浮いたままも　いいのかもね
ずっと　ずっと　ずっと

君の気持ちや　正しい答え
わからないままだけど
もう少しだけ　素直になれば
想い伝わる気がした

聴こえる愛のうた　もっとそばにいさせて
色やかたちをかえ　守ってあげるわ
ほんとは気づいてた　気づかないふりしてた
守られているのは　私だったんだ
ずっと　ずっと　ずっと
ラララララララララ　ラララララララララ、、、、



Romaji

zutto zutto zutto~

hajimete kimi ni fureta hi sugoku dokidoki shita
dakara tsuite ikou tte kokoro ni kimeta
hana ya kaze no kaori mo kono sūpu no nioi mo
kiechatte mo issho ni iraretara ii ya

chīsana omoi ga fukuramu oto ga shita

kikoeru ai no uta motto soba ni isasete
iro ya katachi o kaemamotte ageru wa
kikoeru ai no uta mitsumete irareru nara
boyake ta hibi de sae itoshiku naru wa
zutto zutto zutto

kizutsui te iru kimi ni koe mo kakerenai no
semete sono senaka o dakishimetai yo

chīsana omoi ga hajikeru oto ga shita

kikoeru ai no uta motto soba ni isasete
iro ya katachi o kaemamotte ageru wa
kikoeru ai no uta mitsumete irareru nara
fuwafuwauita mama mo ii no kamo ne
zutto zutto zutto

kimi no kimochi ya tadashii kotae
wakara nai mama da kedo
mōsukoshi dake sunao ni nareba
omoi tsutawaru ki ga shita

kikoeru ai no uta motto soba ni isasete
iro ya katachi o kaemamotte ageru wa
honto wa kizuiteta kizukanai furi shiteta
mamorarete iru no wa watashi dattanda
zutto zutto zutto
rarararararararara rararararararara…



English

For Always, Always, Always

The day I first felt you, my heart wouldn't stop beating
That's why I decided in my heart, that I'd follow you
Things like flowers, the wind, and aroma, and this soup's scent as well

I got a feeling my small emotions have grown

I can hear a love song, let me be by your side some more
I'll change my colors and my form, and protect you
I can hear a love song, if I stare at you long enough
Even the blurred out days, become lovely
Forever, and ever, and ever

I can't even talk to you who has been hurt
I at least want to hold you from the back

I got a feeling my small emotions have grown

I can hear a love song, let me be by your side some more
I'll change my colors and my form, and protect you
I can hear a love song, if only I could just keep gazing at you
and me feeling so frivolous might not be so bad either
For always, always, always

Your feelings, your righteous voice and such
I don't understand them, but
When you got a little more honest
I got a feeling your feelings were conveyed

I can hear a love song, let me by your side some more
I'll change my colors and my form, and protect you
The truth is I was pretending not to notice, but I actually did
You, were the one protecting me
All this time, all this time, all this time

Lalalalalalalalala lalalalalalalala…

[Glenn Teie Kvelland]

Things got finished faster than expected, so I was finished subbing the video before I knew it.
Was planning on waiting a week or so before finishing, in hope someone could check the translation.
Now I only hope the English translation is as good as I hope. It feels a bit strange sompelaces, but maybe the lyrics is that way

Here is the full version of the song with subtitles.




And I also did the ending version, the timings is a little bit off someplaces, compared to the Kanji already on the video. Sorry