http://www.ferricorp.com/anime/excel/bw01.jpg
The original scan. I tweaked the color spectrum in PSP for both the image and the BG, and think it came out really well. Anything need anything?
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http://www.ferricorp.com/anime/excel/bw01.jpg
The original scan. I tweaked the color spectrum in PSP for both the image and the BG, and think it came out really well. Anything need anything?
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
Very nice job. It came out well.
Only suggestion I'd make would be to make the text the same dark brown color as the background ink, instead of black, to make it fit in a little better.
Well, okay, another suggestion - the complex background behind her head seems to compete with her for attention. What would it look like if you flipped the background horizontally?
How's this?
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
My only concern is her jagged outline, other than that everything looks good.
other then the jaggedness,it looks great
She doesn't have a jagged outline. If you zoom in; it's very smooth. ^_^
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
nope, I zoomed in and she still does along her left strip of hair and also some extraction bits are left over around her hair...
it looks fine Escaflowenmoon
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ok maybe its just computer..:lol: no worries then..
I thought the outline was jaggy aswell
But my main problem is the little white bits in her hair... ahh!
And, is the text meant to get lost in the background?
i like it, even though it has no reflection on the zaniness of the anime :P
There. Got rid of the white specks in her hair, and yes the font is supposed to blend in with the BG. As for zaniness; well, the look on her face doesn't look too... crazy. More toned down and... Ropenmatsu 1 ish to me. If you remember; she was the no nonsense one. 2 was the crazier one. Hot Excel Ropenmatsu lesbian scene anyone?
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
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