Fanart Review Request

[Jiang Jin]

Can somebody in this forum please review my fanart?

Medium: Microsoft Paint

Fanart Subject: Valkyria Chronicles

Fanart #1: Corporal Isara Gunther



Fanart #2: Edelweiss

[Zainox]

Wow, for Microsoft paint, this looks awesome! I actually saw this anime not too long ago. Better than I expected it to be. It started off boring for me but by the end I was loving it!
I really like them! I hope to see more. ;3

[Jiang Jin]

Thank you for your feedback! I will be posting more fanart on this thread in the future! I already have some that I am working on.

[Gyzra]

You have a nice cell shaded style which works well for the tank, but the character could use a more interesting pose. Perhaps try watching RWBY on YouTube to see an anime using a similar style and to give you ideas. =]

[Jiang Jin]

Thanks! I viewed the trailers and have links for them below:

[Jiang Jin]

Here are some more fanart.

These 3 are for the Gundam Series:







This one is for Transformers:



These two are for Rayearth:





This one is the Nazi Panzer Faust tank that I drew which I modified into the Edelweiss by removing the swastika and replacing it with the Gallian national flag from Valkyria Chronicles:

[LegenSegerr]

really good,, I like the shade.. especially on Edelweiss

[Jiang Jin]

really good,, I like the shade.. especially on Edelweiss

Thank you.

[Jiang Jin]

Here is a modified version of the Corporal Isara Gunther fan art with camouflage patterns:



Be sure to visit my deviant art page: https://draklortank.deviantart.com/

[PictureGuy]

^ Still a bit too stiff and wooden. He looks more like a doll than someone who is supposed to be a character. Not that I could do any better, but you did want opinions.

[Jiang Jin]

What about the other fan art I posted on this page? How are they?

^ Still a bit too stiff and wooden. He looks more like a doll than someone who is supposed to be a character. Not that I could do any better, but you did want opinions.

Note: I made these drawings using only Microsoft Paint and a mouse.

[Operator 7G]

Hey, this is a really good piece. Congratulations for getting so much detail in with MSPaint! I do, however, agree that it looks a bit wooden/stiff. For a character to stand there has to be some gravity on the clothes and posture. I see that the arms are a good width but the armpits are way too high into her shoulders. It's almost as if she doesn't have any bone behind her shoulders. The colors and details are good but a different stance or pose would help give it some action. I do understand that it's a prototype and that it's supposed to have descriptive information but it'd be nice if the drawing could tell a story. Like, she doesn't have to necessarily talk to anybody - but if she were posed with things in either the foreground or the background it would give the painting a more interesting feature. And clothes have folds and crevices and reveal the shape of the body underneath - they aren't a flat surface. And her bosom is a little masculine so I would allow for her to have more of a collar bone and then to fall naturally in front of her ribs. Otherwise, you've got the right information here. I think you're doing great - especially for doing this with just a mouse! I'd probably fall to pieces if I had to do that. I really, really, appreciate my drawing tablet.