Tsugihagi Sandoku correction

[WarriorKalia]

http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vo...agisandoku.htm

At the beginning (or around there) is "omoide no tsumatta kurabireta nuno to"; it should be "omoide no tsumatta kutabireta nuno to"

After a few more lines, there's "tsugihagi awasete naoshite yo!"; it should read "tsugihagi awase de naoshite yo!"

Somewhere around two thirds through is "tte oningyousan iu no." It should be "tte oningyousan ga iu no."

A line near the end reads "mahou no sekai wo watashi no sekai wa konna ni mo chigauno."; It should read "mahou no sekai to watashi no sekai wa konna ni mo chigauno."

Another line after it reads "hitokake no haha no sara ni nori"; It should be "hitokake no haha ga sara ni nori"

... I suck at this.

[animeyay]

Everything else is a valid correction, but are you sure it's supposed to be "awase de" as opposed to "awasete"?

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[WarriorKalia]

Oh, I can do that? Okay, I'll remember that for next time.

Also, the kanji is 継ぎ接ぎ合わせで 直してよ！

Looks like 'de' to me, but then, I suppose it might have been a typo on the part of the transcriber...?