I'm sorry for being a bother, but I need assistance again. Lol..

I have a English 1102 Definition Essay due tonight by 11:45. It's only supposed to be 5 paragraphs long. Anyways, my English professor this semester is super strict and marks off 15 points or so for every fragment. I always place my commas in the wrong spot. Lol.. Any English majors or someone willing to look over my essay let me know. ^^