Chii Chan Wallpaper

[gadgetgirl16]

lol..hi everyone sorry its been a long time....well heres the wall.....i know it needs a lot of work but i just thinking what should i put in there....and sergestions (spell) commits for what should i do? :^_^:

edit: sorry i was kicked off the proxy when it was loading in.....now its fixed

[wizz-o-matic]

Try to reupload it, it doesn't want to load.

[Hawkeye]

it worked for me

[WeyrDragon]

worked for me too, but anyways, the background doesnt go with the character, you should try something softer, its just too bumpy and jagged for her type of character.

[Xian Pu]

It's too bright and you have a hard time discerning exactly WHERE Chi is in it. >.> Good idea on the whole, but needs some improvments. ^_^

[escaflownemoon]

bg doesn't fit with Chi here, needs something softer and not so busy. Nice concept for some other anime I suppose?

[Foxxer]

I agree. The background draws attention away from the character. Now maybe if Chii had heavier lines or more saturated colors?

[gadgetgirl16]

ok ill try and work on like a little rain effic and maybe dark colors.....

[gadgetgirl16]

ok ive added a more of a bg to it...but it still needed more.....what do u guys think?

[escaflownemoon]

The bg looks better than the first. I think a snowy bg might fit better that's just me. Maybe add the stuff that is falling off of her in the bg.

[WeyrDragon]

yeah, that bg is much better than the first, and as escaflowne said, the surff thats falling around the character should probably be on the entire wall.

[Candy-StarR]

There's yukky extraction all around her...
And the second background is waay better then the first.

[Foxxer]

The green background is still too bold, compared with her delicate lines, and draws attention away from her. Decrease the background saturation, and increase the saturation on Chii, I'd recommend.

[DDR Pip]

I agree with escaflownemoon, snow would seem to fit the best. I don't think the waves would match as well as snow.

[Xian Pu]

Better BG, but that scan of Chii isn't the greatest. Something about the position of her head bugs me. >.> At any rate, it's a great idea you've got going on here. Keep on trying, you'll get it.

[_hades the wicked]

First one: I almost fell off my chair when it loaded! Wha...! That bg is like... Whoa...
Second one: Greatly better, but your cutout needs a lot of work (and I really mean a loooot), you need more elements on the wall, and the waterdrops that are on chii... They look wrong, because there are waterdrops on her, but not on the rest of the wall...