Revolutionary GirlUtena - Sekai o Kakumei Suru Tame ni

[EJTranslations]

Thank you. This is an interesting way of looking at the song, but I still disagree with your interpretations from a grammatical standpoint, and from a context-of-the-story standpoint, I continue to believe that you're reading too much into what is really a straightforward explanation of the premise.

[Asufa]

That's why I leave to you the office of this translation. So that the translation of this song doesn't become dull, to become complete, I think that only you can make it better with appropriate improvements. From the grammatical standpoint and the context-of-the-story standpoint. I never watch Utena until the end of the story, only partially the manga and some chapters of the anime. Please, translate it as you wish or leave it the way it was before, if you think this is fair. According to everything you know. I will not be angry, I will be happy if it becomes different from what I believed till now. Because you will show the real story standpoint.