Told ya, you could do it. Good job on just doing it! English ain't my first language as well, but try to make some in your own as well.
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"I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
"Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
"Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
"I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Third paragraph is genius, idead every soul needs mending. Nice peom man.
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Haha, that come out in those inspiration moments when it feels like your brain is faster than you hand writing the verses xD
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Anyways, besides the third paragraph, did you like anything else in particular? [SPOILER]I think I may have wrote it too religiously, but that's what I felt in the "heat of the moment" [SPOILER]
"I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
"Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
"Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
"I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
has a really nice ring and tone to it! really brings up the spirit in a way. but i guess the endings usually do end in some reference to death. i hope i did interpret it right...
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I edited your post for you. Forum default colour should be used for all poems.
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