Tsugihagi Sandoku

[WarriorKalia]

Duh, I am such a moron. Anyway, the sixth line should read "oningyousan wa kowarete" instead of "oningyousan wa niwarete". I don't see anything else offhand but, that's definitely wrong.

[AzureDark]

1. Put up the lyric's link first thing
2. If it's your own work you want corrected, you don't need to make a topic and just simply PM me.