Isis Eaglet Wallpaper

[Light Buster]

Hope everyone here is having a great Christmas Eve so far. Here's an early gift to all of AF.

Character: Isis Eaglet
Anime/Manga: Magical War Chronicle Lyrical Nanoha Force
Time: About 2 hours...

[Light Buster]

Here's another version of the wall...

[Vintniv]

Okay, I'll help you out. You are using a lot of C4Ds, an anime girl, and a Wireframe. The problem is not the selection of the images, its really how you used them all together. Its a little sloppy.

What ties them all together? Where do you want me to look? I like that the wireframe has this horizon line thing going for it, I like that you are using a very 'special' image as something to recognize, I like that you are exploring other styles. I think you need better organization in terms of this piece, and quick way to do that is through the rule of thirds: http://www.digital-photography-schoo...0605022117.jpg

This little grid that divides up your image up should help you understand more about focus. If you look at the linked image I provided, the most interesting parts of the image are all clustered on the right side, and slowly the space becomes empty as you go left. With your wallpaper, this isnt happening, if you start at the right, you have Isis, and then as you keep going left, there's a lot of explodey C4Ds going on. So there's not a lot of space for the eyes to rest.

I think you should experiment more with what you choose to fill your space with. Try to cluster things like C4Ds and wire frames around what you really want people to look at, then try to slowly transition those areas into less significant areas. Good luck!

[Light Buster]

Okay, took out the exploding C4D on the left side entirely, as well as decreased the text size.

[Mispero]

I put this wallpapers on my pc, i like it.