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    I'm working on a VN and I'd like some critique on the characters I have so far. Please be specific. Thank you




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    I think there are 2 things that your characters lack: solid character and details.

    Solid character: this may be explained by my lack of knowledge of what your characters are exactly for--their backgrounds and such. I think the characters do not emit great aura. They look plain and happy. I somehow can't fully create a deep impression based on the drawings I see. I think you need to put more emotion in their poses, eyes, and such.

    Details: I'm thinking these may be drafts and that's why they aren't that polished yet. However, more details would make them great. For example, you should make different eye sizes and shapes for the 3 characters. The 2 females look quite the same to me, just with different hairs and lips. Put more focus on making eyebrows, eyes, and face shapes different, and you will surely have great, deep characters. Things like scars, blemishes, moles, and other certain features that make your character easily recognizable will also be great.

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    Default Re: Feedback Please?

    These are good but I think it could be better if the eyes were proportioned and these drawings had more details (I suck in adding details also). Keep it up though!

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