Kanako Kotera - Bokura no Mirai

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Kanako Kotera - Bokura no Mirai from the PC game Zwei2 (ツヴァイ2) opening.


Issues
1) Could someone check the translation of the next three lines? This is my second translation of a song, and this is harder than my first one.

ちっぽけなプライド　笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは　胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests

note:たきゃ = tai, apparently it is Kansei ben or Osaka ben or something.

広い空は僕らを待ってる　未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
//maybe, "The spacious sky is waiting for us and the future is sparkling" ?

3) If you notice anything any problems please say so.
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//Full thing
作詞:一二三恭　　作曲:Falcom Sound Team J.D.K　　編曲:神藤由東大　　歌:小寺可南子


夢を追いかけて　夢に迷い込み
Chasing after a dream while lost in a dream, and
そう　僕らは 迷い続ける
like this, we continue to be lost

道を見失い　動けないのなら
If you lost sight of the path and cannot continue, then
さあ　思い出そう　あの約束
come now, remember that promise

ちっぽけなプライド　笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは　胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests

広がる空は僕らを待ってる　未来眩しくて
The extending sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう　僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it

光追いかけて　闇に迷ったら
If you are chasing after the light and lost in darkness, then
さあ　思い出そう　あの約束
come now, remember that promise.

ちっぽけなプライド　笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
忘れないその言葉が　胸の奥に響く
Those unforgettable words reverberate inside in our chests

見果てぬ空は　僕らを呼んでる　未来輝いて
The never-ending sky is calling us in the sparkling future
七色の橋渡ろう　僕らはきっと出会うさ
Let's cross the seven-colored bridge, and we will definitely meet

広い空は僕らを待ってる　未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう　僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it
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yume wo oikakete yume ni mayoikomi
sou bokura wa mayoi tsudzukeru

michi wo miushinai ugokenai no nara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku

chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
yuzurenai kono omoi wa mune no oku ni aru sa

hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa

hikari oikakete, yami ni mayottara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku

chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
wasurenai sono kotoba ga mune no oku ni hibiku

mihatenu sora wa bokura wo yonderu mirai kagayaite
nanairo no hashi watarou bokura wa kitto deau sa

hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa

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