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    Default Find Your Beat

    New wallpaper! As always, comments, critique and anything else is greatly appreciated ^_^
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    Default Re: Find Your Beat

    Kay.

    Stock is small, and out of the way. Why? And how much of that lovely colored vector stuff did you actually make? Because I am comparing that to every thing else there, and it just doesnt make sense.

    The colored vector flow works fine by itself; the 'X's, lines, bubbles, etc that you appear to have added (because they totally stand out) just dont belong there.

    The background is too flat given the depth of the rest of the wallpaper. I would have probably used more of that flowy stuff you had initially, but just spread it out across the rest of the wallpaper so it looks consistent.

    Given that you are using two styles, texture and vector (and brushing, but I personally hate that style), you should look into things like color contrast, balance, positive/negative space, and the like.

    Overall, you gotta start somewhere, and this is good for what it is.

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    Default Re: Find Your Beat

    Quote Originally Posted by Serated View Post
    Kay.

    Stock is small, and out of the way. Why? And how much of that lovely colored vector stuff did you actually make? Because I am comparing that to every thing else there, and it just doesnt make sense.

    The colored vector flow works fine by itself; the 'X's, lines, bubbles, etc that you appear to have added (because they totally stand out) just dont belong there.

    The background is too flat given the depth of the rest of the wallpaper. I would have probably used more of that flowy stuff you had initially, but just spread it out across the rest of the wallpaper so it looks consistent.

    Given that you are using two styles, texture and vector (and brushing, but I personally hate that style), you should look into things like color contrast, balance, positive/negative space, and the like.

    Overall, you gotta start somewhere, and this is good for what it is.
    i do not agree whith you its a good clean style whit nice coloring if he adds more effects to it it wil only screw up the flow of the piece

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    Default Re: Find Your Beat

    2 words...WOW-WIE!! But agreed with Ivar, adding too many waving effects would have crowded if not distracted from the nice looking lady in the bikini. It looks pretty good as is...however my concern is the attitude placed on such critiques...seems a little mean. I know, some people may be starting out with creating something like this, but there's no need to come off as disrespectful.
    Last edited by solidarmor; 11-10-2011 at 11:38 PM.
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