First AMV!

[trunkiu]

[Mang]

My criticism

> Music doesn't not fit anime at all :[
> Subtitles? (Next time remove them when you make another video)
> You over did it with the Video Overlays (Try not to use so much next time) (and by overlays I mean opacity lowering etc)
> Video Quality is low? err never mind ;p
> Chroma Keying is the easy way out and its looks fugly ( Always use masking, it just looks more pro)

Other than that, It was Okay Mang. ;P

[trunkiu]

... At what point did you see subtitles? o_O

And I did use masking, I used a lot of feathering though, so that's probably what made it look so blurry.

And I thought, that I did a pretty good job at matching up the lyrics, with what was going on in the video. But to each their own, I guess. ;p

[blueangel06661]

Decent for a first. Most of them are really bad.

-You didn't have subtitles so I don't know what @MangMang was going on about.
-You really do need to lay off of the overlays. It's very distracting when there isn't something visually solid to look at. When you have 3 different scenes going on at once nearly throughout the whole video it's really hard to understand the video. An AMV tells a story along with the music.
-I'm not very big on effects but rather more of the story telling so that's really all I can offer.

[trunkiu]

Decent for a first. Most of them are really bad.

-You didn't have subtitles so I don't know what @MangMang was going on about.
-You really do need to lay off of the overlays. It's very distracting when there isn't something visually solid to look at. When you have 3 different scenes going on at once nearly throughout the whole video it's really hard to understand the video. An AMV tells a story along with the music.
-I'm not very big on effects but rather more of the story telling so that's really all I can offer.

Thanks for the advice!

And yeah, I admit I went a little crazy with the overlapping, especially towards the end. xD
And I agree, that telling a story through an amv, with less special effects probably does look better. But, this AMV was mostly just me messing around with the special effects on my Sony Vegas xD

[Mang]

I must have been extremely drunk or I was watching the 2 Soul Eater amvs simultaneously with this amv. My criticism remains valid though. (Besides the subtitles thing ;p).

I'm not trying to sound harsh but I am giving out *the truth*, which is really the only way to improve, I know this because I've been through it. You can either take it to heart or ignore it. Your choice :>.

Also even if you did match the lyrics, it is still not enough to grant this song to this anime. but each to own I guess ;p

[trunkiu]

I must have been extremely drunk or I was watching the 2 Soul Eater amvs simultaneously with this amv. My criticism remains valid though. (Besides the subtitles thing ;p).

I'm not trying to sound harsh but I am giving out *the truth*, which is really the only way to improve, I know this because I've been through it. You can either take it to heart or ignore it. Your choice :>.

Also even if you did match the lyrics, it is still not enough to grant this song to this anime. but each to own I guess ;p

Yeah, it's cool. I knew you weren't trying to be rude or anything. I was just confused withe the subtitle thing, and I disagreed with what you said about the song choice. Which in all honesty is opinionated, and really isn't worth arguing over anyways. xD

Thanks for your advice too, btw!