Watching You

[ELR]

Criticize as you please, but enjoy
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Watching You
Darkened clouds that gloom my skies,
Temperance moments lost with the lies,
Echoes of tears from soldered eyes,
Watching it drip-soft raspy sighs..

But not all is down, not all is sad,
Sinister smiles from the moon-mad-
Taking over the sight of what has had
Been floating and molding-forever bad..

But he frowns as translation exposition has come,
My light shines brighter-Your sight shares some-
Around you fade, my prospect is back-hum..
Watching you, my plenteous chum.

[Nesh]

Very nice
I love the rime