haha,,, I'm beginner on drawing...

[aristyopramana]

what do you think?

[G-FLASH]

Not bad you got potential and your getting there.
the only flaws are that the body has unnecessary bending it's hard to tell weather she is standing upright or tilting forward.
the neck is too thick for a young girl like herself too..
The face is just right for the kind of girl she is innocent wise.

[aristyopramana]

Not bad you got potential and your getting there.
the only flaws are that the body has unnecessary bending it's hard to tell weather she is standing upright or tilting forward.
the neck is too thick for a young girl like herself too..
The face is just right for the kind of girl she is innocent wise.

Hmm.. you are right. I must try harder for drawing...
Thanks for suggestion ^_^

[aristyopramana]

I am study for coloring..
What do you think ?

[Vintniv]

First of all, welcome to fanart. Keep in mind, that this is your one (1) thread, so any further art you wish to upload, you just continuously update this thread.


As for your color, it might need a little work. There are a lot of white bloch areas that indicate you didnt properly cover them. Secondly, you have no sense of depth to this. no shading, no highlights, not much of anything.

Here's what I would suggest for future works, because I coloring is the easy part. Use reference to draw your initial sketch. It doenst have to be perfect, but you should try to get as close as possible. There are obviously a lot of flaws with your drawing here, but its all about practice, so find something simple to draw and very loosely sketch it. From there, you can color it to hide mistakes and fix things as you go along.

I personally always suggest drawing your hands before any actual anime character, because your hands are always there, and if you can get the proportions of a hand done correctly, than an anime character is will REALLY easy (you can also color your hands). Good luck!

[aristyopramana]

yeah.. your'e right. I shall prepare about it..
thank you ^_^

[kimupapa]

They're pretty cool IMO, but I think you should practice more and use more guidelines and stuff. Nice work. Say, how old are you?