Poem: The Carnal Requiem

[Tetsanosuke]

No more I'd wish to think,
Even less I would require-
A furnishing of sin
For this carnal desire

And even less I'd ponder
No more could I judge,
Significance be less
No more than a nudge

Under laces tied tight
A fire forever worn,
Within loins of amethyst
Bastard children to be born

A pointlessness of sultry
What my beast would pursue,
The Poison is the pinnacle
Of what a soul would consume

But the eyes bleed less
Than the heart; far more blind
Binding by the sound of-
Heartstrings well refined

With every chorus a whisper
To Mephistopheles' Choir,
And every pint of love,
Would be inferred and required

I drink to the nights when the charades
Felt like reality within a heart,
And toast to the most moist waves
Where faith and reason avidly depart

[Keena]

Wow, there's so much emotion in this poem! *_* It was amazing!

[ELR]

^_^ Yes, Tetsa does that a lot when he writes. Always making sure the descriptions are deep and readable before going on to the next part. It's why I look up to him, I wish to be as good with my writing someday. Wonderful work, as always, it is great to see another one of your poems up, it had been a while. Keep writing, my friend.

[Tetsanosuke]

You do me so much honor with your praise, Rose. Thank you.

I've been a ninja for a while on AF, and just decided to post a more recent work.

[Aleyna]

Wow! I didn't know that you still post on here!
I deffinately felt the words, they sunk into me. I definitely felt the imagery with the eyes and the heart.

[Senjou_Akira]

so emotional and i feel it too much
it has no voice but it goes well with the instrumental i'm listening to o_o

it's too good, too awesome