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Tombstone
Night sky that shines down tonight,
Bless all who seem to be in sight,
Wash these tears that sting like a bite,
Turn all the fear into something bright.
Just wish you were here day and night
To help me hold of this ever fearing fight.

But facing down I have to cry,
You were too young to even die,
Losing in what you believed-sigh...
Every drop spilt feels so dry,
You left before I could even say bye,
From the stone I turn-I hope it's all a lie.

Rolling clouds of saddened gray,
And here your tombstone lay,
In this undermining shrubs ray,
But I have to leave with no delay,
I can't bare to see you all fray,
I promise to come back in the month of May.


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