[REQ]夏と廊下と花畑-Hatsune Miku[English+Romaji]

[Rei]

I can get the word 'smirched', just that I see it more often in its more common form, besmirched, when they're talking about their family name being...besmirched or something. Still, maybe it's to obscure for normal audiences?

[Hikarin]

Ah~ Okay, I'm about to submit it finally and at first when i read t he first few lines of the song.... it seemed sweet. I read it fully the second time.... then I thought it was weird. Now that I have my third look on it, I think it could be slightly dirty. Either way, this song is just weird and confusing so sorry if my translation ends up the same <.<

As for sullied.... I personally use the word myself. Even when I translated the Gantz ending theme Last Kiss, I translated one line as ".... just don't sully our love".

Edit: Okay, I've submitted it now.... Umm.... is this song about a peep show or something? @_@

[animeyay]

Hahahaha, awww, Hikarin, I'm not sure to call you overly innocent or what. XD

I thought it was pretty obvious. Ahem, the protagonist (who lives in Room#4) said she could no longer suppress her libido impulse, so throughout the song, she had her first romance with the person living in Room#3, and her second romance with the person in Room#2, and her 3rd romance with the person in Room#1. She even mentioned if she gets tired of an old flower (lover), she'll just move on to a new one...

[Hikarin]

....Auuuu~ . I couldn't get it at all! ><

Well, that's one song over with anyway. I was really confusing me though. Being confused isn't fun! =0

[animeyay]

It's okay. It just shows how dirty my mind is, that I get this sort of things so quickly. XD
But yea, at least you finished it as promised, so that's what counts! =)

[Hikarin]

*Looks at mood* Ehe.... I see ;p So that and your "dirty mind" probably fits in two and two then! =0 Nah, just kidding. I think a primary school kid would get it before I did <.<

But after all that confusion, I think I'd just like to forget it all now!XD

[Rei]

Eh, I can't actually understand it, but I'll have to see the translation then. Hikarin's probably the most innocent here...? ^^"